Kissing In Action

It wasn’t the love
He was thinking of
But into love fell he
For he went missing
When last seen kissing
His lovely Cannabel Lee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 5:18 AM
"Cannabel Lee" - what a fantastic take on a name!
Wolveridge Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Haha! I've just looked through two pages of misery poems and at last something that made me laugh. I'm not sure what Poe would have thought, but I like it. Best wishes, Peter
Pen Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Whit; appropriately named. My favorite of yours. Well done!
Kereopa Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 9:22 AM
I’m smiling too. Maybe there’s a lot more than kissing, when ur kissing Cannabel Lee.
Ashford Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Interesting lines Whit. Edgar Allan Poe on Cannabis? Anyway, it made me smile,
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