Liam Mcdaid Poet Terza Rima

Kissing Deep Salt

Dealing with deep touching issues sleepless nights worried
lovingly do not understand my head anymore teardrops keep falling weakness 
cut from finest silk cannot take this heartbreak and disappointment
 
Enough watching my mother and father crying 
respect not into this hurting pain brings joy ends inside 
indignity knowing my path was chosen from birth
 
Goodness knows why through the injustice reeks tyranny inflames scars
unhappy dealing with invisible grief and shame it brings forth 
sharing what I must make visible fighting for truth hate manifesting 
 
Opening these eyes a miracle dream bowing defeat comes disturbing news
within great pain and loss not guilty judged pleas unheard story
No say deemed unworthy suffering with the courage to stand up against conviction

What I believe in the end justice peace holds pure the innocence unheard
societies untouchables in this world tyranny hides shame to speak 
rising behind pride and greed masks destruction of a heart's dignity

When falling down on my knees burdened heavily patience wounds salted
always stood for what is right speaking up in defense true spirit embracing souls joined love united we sang with freedom choosing our destinies directions join

Dancing tunes always sunshine peace finds the only direction home hand in hand
 such friendship forever a promise shines one day to come we have walked 
this path golden together shared in this life our dreams kissing sacred gift maiden

 
unrhymed tercet

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Debbie Guzzi February 15, 2015 at 3:01 PM A soul warming verse this chilly Sunday afternoon. Light & Love

Paul Callus January 28, 2015 at 8:38 AM This is very heartfelt and sad, Liam, and I am moved. May strength and truth be on the side of the innocent victim who has to pass through much anguish and pain. Let's hope that true justice will always triumph in the end. All the best my friend. Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2015 at 11:19 AM yeah paul what hurts me more is seeing the toll it has on my poor mother breaks my heart powerless armed only with honesty i can do noting as she knows the truth wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly bless you

Charmaine Chircop January 28, 2015 at 6:17 AM A deep and emotive poem.Truth will always be known in the end ..Yes people might suffer injustice and even their families have to endure the pain,but the truth will set you free.Charma Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2015 at 7:33 AM so true charmaine the beacon of justice no where to hide in the end wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2015 at 1:26 PM - Several people get hurt, considering human injustice - no one should be treated unfairly - Whatever how painful things may be, the truth must always win! - The road you go, you need to follow to end - follow it and through shadows landscape - Nobody can stop - and no one can turn back ...... I cry with you my friend Liam - big hug // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2015 at 7:27 AM all i have is the truth i know no other story anne lise in the end, thank you for the wonderful comment dear pal bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter January 27, 2015 at 12:48 PM Hi Liam! My dearest friend, as you know I'm so very sad and sorry to hear about all the situations, injustices, you're facing and suffering for a long time. You're not alone!I'm praying for you and that justice be served and you'll walk free.There's a lot people who love you and the reason we cry is because we love you and care a lot for you, and that's very natural and human, Liam. You shouldn't blame yourself for this, you didn't create it, it is evil in this world. You're innocent, a victim.Believe in you!God knows your heart is beautiful and pure. Don't lose hope! God is with you always! Be positive, stay strong in your faith and in that justice shall be done with God's divine help. God listens to prayers! Keep your dreams and hopes! May they come true! May God grant you the peace you're seeking for! May you feel the love of God and His Angels all the time around you. God bless you always! Wish you all the best! Have a very lovely evening! Love and hugs! :)XXXOXXOX D. ^O^ Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2015 at 7:19 AM thank you dorian for the wonderful comment the blame lies with the liar maybe i am not a victim just a pen who opens a world reality up in eternal rest from this world i will find true happiness as our time is short here shows the true face of man bless you dear friend