Kisses

In my fantasies I hold you close in my loving arms
Your murmuring lips capture mine and take me to another place
The morning sun kisses my cheek and I am empty again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Great one that is filled with passion..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:59 PM
wow, I REALLY like YOURS, Barbara. It says so much more than just describing a kiss.
Long Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Nice poem. I enjoyed it.
Johnson Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 7:28 PM
love is babe...Sijo i can't claim to know it how? but we sometimes try...
Stanley Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Barbara, very nice. I like the last line as the "sun kisses" you in the morning, Well done and all the best for the contest, Greg
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