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Image result for pictures of hill and valleys in the fall of the year

kissed

hills
awake
expose gold
flash burgundy
fall has kissed its trees.
condensation
below in
quiet 
dale

natureninette

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Sotto Poet

November 26, 2023 at 8:29 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win.

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2023 at 9:35 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 26, 2023 at 6:35 AM

Sara, back to Congratulate you too on the win in the contest. Well deserved with such a great ninette and nice picture to go with. Thanks also for your lovely comment. Have a nice dayxxx

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2023 at 9:34 AM

Why, thank you, Maria. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

November 25, 2023 at 1:59 PM

aww. Sweet images Sara. Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

November 25, 2023 at 2:44 PM

Linda, thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 24, 2023 at 1:50 PM

Action, color and beauty abound in this beautiful ninette, Sara. A pleasure to read! Congratulations on your win. Evelyn

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2023 at 2:02 PM

Thank you, Evelyn for dropping by to say congratulations. Your comments add a special touch. Sara K

Paul Callus

November 24, 2023 at 10:34 AM

Yours is a beautiful Ninette, Sara. The gold and burgundy are there for all to enjoy. Congratulations on securing a podium finish! Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2023 at 2:02 PM

Why, thank you, Paul. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 24, 2023 at 7:49 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "kissed" Ninette write/pretty picture. I love this one... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2023 at 7:54 AM

Thank you, Paula. Probably writing won't happen today, but sometimes a line or two hits me when not expected. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2023 at 8:20 PM

So pretty and with the picture I'm seeing now too. Congrats and I hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving.

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2023 at 5:23 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. Also, thanks for letting me know I placed. Thanksgiving was nice. Sara K

Judy Ball

November 21, 2023 at 7:59 AM

Sara you bring out the beauty of Fall in all it's splendor. Great work. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2023 at 12:10 PM

Thank you, Judy. It is here and anytime could end even though winter is still a month away. Sara K

Christina Bowring

November 20, 2023 at 12:51 PM

This is a beautiful Ninette dear Sara. Such exquisite, well crafted chosen words and stunning imagery. The picture pairs so well with this delightful autumnal poem. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings and smiles to you :):)

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 1:29 PM

Love the double smile and I need those blessings. Thanks for sharing your uplifting review of my work. Sara K

Howard Kerr

November 20, 2023 at 9:24 AM

Sara, A majestic image piece that leaves a lasting impression on the reader. Exquisite choice of words underlines this poem form Kind regards Howard

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 10:56 AM

Thank you, Howard. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Silent One

November 15, 2023 at 3:17 PM

Lovely imagery Sara..love the use of colours here to describe what you wanted to express.

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:52 AM

Thank you, SO. This is one from a few years ago that I reposted. Sara K

Regina Elliott

November 15, 2023 at 6:37 AM

Sara, very lovely autumnal Ninette. My very best wishes for the contest with this worthy contender. Thanksgiving Blessings to you and your family. ~

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2023 at 8:40 AM

Why, thank you, Regina. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Your visits are valuable to me. Sara K

Sotto Poet

November 15, 2023 at 5:11 AM

Sara, your adept portrayal of the enchanting colors amidst the undulating landscapes is a testament to your exquisite artistry. You skillfully encapsulate the breathtaking visuals with eloquent brevity.

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2023 at 5:39 AM

Lasaad, thank you for your high praise of my work. I appreciate your visit and thank you for reading and commenting. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

November 14, 2023 at 11:14 AM

I envision this scene through your imagery Sara. It's lovely! :)

Sara Kendrick

November 14, 2023 at 12:33 PM

I'm glad that you could get a vision of the place through my imagery, Linda. Thank you for all your visits and support by taking time to read and comment. Sara K

Ink Empress

November 14, 2023 at 8:17 AM

Wow this is absolutely stunning dear Sara, your way with using colors and painting imagery is beyond impeccable. I am loving these ninettes and the way very descriptive wordplay. I especially love “ fall has kissed its trees.” beautiful. Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light today and always

Sara Kendrick

November 14, 2023 at 12:31 PM

Always need the light, I E. I am glad that you stopped by, took time to read and leave a comment. Thank you, Sara K.