Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

Kiss the Wind

I lay down
A lazy Sunday afternoon
The first winds from the north
Blowing snow like a blanket upon our souls

I fall asleep, in a haze of dreams
Where there she appears and forgive the obvious
The woman of my dreams
Never undressed, mind nor body

Here, in my delusion I beg for her heart
Tears roll down upon her chest
I whisper softly, tell me, tell me
You are my twin, in coldness and the dark

Entwined, we breathe slowly in silence
Words have flowed like the tears of the past
I hold on, in love, in desperation, in ecstasy
I caress her hair, and whisper be mine

Forever

Then I awoke, another sad day

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Connie Marcum Wong June 10, 2015 at 3:43 PM Arthur. I was reading love poems and came across this beauty again. I can feel the depth of your emotions expressed in each lovely line. A fave of your work. Blessings, Connie Arthur Vaso June 12, 2015 at 11:48 PM You are so kind Connie, I love you for that!!!!!

Meg Anderson December 5, 2014 at 10:02 PM Arthur, what sweet write! You got me at the end. A sad day indeed. Meg Arthur Vaso June 12, 2015 at 11:48 PM Thanks Meg, so sorry for not answering, for some reason now and then I miss some comments! Hope you are doing well!

Ana Espinola Collins November 23, 2014 at 2:32 PM A beautifully written daydream...I felt every word but don't be sad, dreams can come true....just keep dreaming..take care :) Ana Arthur Vaso December 5, 2014 at 10:10 PM Thank you, I have been dreaming and dreaming and dreaming, and still you are not at my door!!!! :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2014 at 11:26 AM this is absolutely beautiful and poignant. I love this. A FAVE Arthur Vaso December 5, 2014 at 10:09 PM Thank you Andrea, this is so very kind of you!!!!

Liam Mcdaid November 22, 2014 at 9:47 AM very beautifully painted piece arthur how i know this feeling dear friend heartfelt bless you pal Arthur Vaso December 5, 2014 at 10:08 PM I was sure I answered the comments in this poem, but it seems not, either my wine is very good, or I am getting old, either way, thank you kindly!

Dorian Petersen Potter November 22, 2014 at 1:13 AM Eh Art, very warm daydreaming then you sadly woke up to a brutal cold reality. lol nice and humorous! Quite enjoyed it my friend. A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. Arthur Vaso December 5, 2014 at 10:07 PM Thank you so much Dorian, sorry for long delay, sometimes I seem to miss some comments!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 20, 2014 at 8:18 AM this dreamy and sad.. but i like best your poem"sray away from my heart"... Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:34 PM Thanks Olive, hugs!!! GBU

Demetrios Trifiatis November 20, 2014 at 7:36 AM A soul never dreams of something that cannot achieve! A marvelous dream wrapped in a majestic verse, dear Arthur! A seven! Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:34 PM Thank you Demetrios, I sure hope you are correct!

Casarah Nance November 19, 2014 at 4:31 PM Oh my goodness Arthur, you had me, wow your words are magic and I was under your spell, don't wake me up, that was a perfect moment. Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:32 PM I had you? wow that must have been what they call a "quickie" wink wink!!!! Thanks Cas you are such a sweetie!

Paul Callus November 19, 2014 at 4:27 PM Very romantic, dreamy and sad. But even delusion can turn into reality. // paul Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:31 PM Thanks Paul, one can dream!!!! :)

Kelly Deschler November 19, 2014 at 12:36 AM All realities begin as dreams, so don't give up on meeting her, Arthur. Love always happens when we least expect it... I really enjoyed this beautiful expression of longing. Really great writing, Arthur! Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:29 PM I LOVE YOU!!!! Lets get Married!!!! wow that took me by surprise, I bet you too!!!! ( kidding ) and I agree, many things start with a dream, however in life is not what gets tossed at you its always how you choose to deal with it, both the good and the bad!!! Thanks so much Kelly!!

A.E. Rivenbark November 18, 2014 at 6:47 PM Oh how our dreams can taunt us. Excellent as always Arthur! Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:27 PM Some-days I sure prefer the dreams! thank you so much

Robert Lindley November 17, 2014 at 4:51 PM Well done my friend. Runs the roads of different emotions as it is read. Closing line, haven't we all felt that at one time or another? Great write a super 7 my friend.. Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:16 PM Thank you Robert! I hope you are doing well and having better times!

Cherl Dunn November 17, 2014 at 4:26 PM Love this my friend an excellent work of icy passion, that could melt the heart of any ice maiden, bravo cheri I'm glad you like my poem so much thanks for your comment of appreciation cheri Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:14 PM merci a toi aussi chéri !

Connie Marcum Wong November 17, 2014 at 1:57 PM Arthur, I hope the spirit of poetry will brighten your day as you realize how this beautiful sad poem has reached my heart and brightened mine! Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:12 PM Merci Connie, I assure you the feeling is mutual, you are very talented.

Liam Mcdaid November 17, 2014 at 9:53 AM love the style in which you drew this arthur Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:11 PM Thank you liam, now shhhhhhh but some good ol Irish Whiskey helped out here!!!

Nette Onclaud November 17, 2014 at 4:59 AM how poignant can dreams be, Arthur... so well done!.. huggs Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:10 PM Thank you nette, sometimes when one writes a special poem, well its just so nice to get kind words as yours, I really appreciate it!

Katrina Monique Cayanan November 17, 2014 at 1:12 AM Arthur this is much more beautiful dream! It seems we are chasing ourselves away from reality now! and this is poetry.. :) Bless your heart. Arthur Vaso November 21, 2014 at 9:09 PM And bless you too for being so kind and generous to me! :)

Eve Roper November 16, 2014 at 10:31 PM Arthur, when the weather changes to gray and gloomy it does make for a lazy day, it has been the same here. :) eve Arthur Vaso November 16, 2014 at 10:46 PM Yes, is the season for it, hope you are doing well! Hugs