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Kiss the Wind

I lay down
A lazy Sunday afternoon
The first winds from the north
Blowing snow like a blanket upon our souls

I fall asleep, in a haze of dreams
Where there she appears and forgive the obvious
The woman of my dreams
Never undressed, mind nor body

Here, in my delusion I beg for her heart
Tears roll down upon her chest
I whisper softly, tell me, tell me
You are my twin, in coldness and the dark

Entwined, we breathe slowly in silence
Words have flowed like the tears of the past
I hold on, in love, in desperation, in ecstasy
I caress her hair, and whisper be mine

Forever

Then I awoke, another sad day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/10/2015 3:43:00 PM
Arthur. I was reading love poems and came across this beauty again. I can feel the depth of your emotions expressed in each lovely line. A fave of your work. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/12/2015 11:48:00 PM
You are so kind Connie, I love you for that!!!!!
Date: 12/5/2014 10:02:00 PM
Arthur, what sweet write! You got me at the end. A sad day indeed. Meg
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Date: 6/12/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Meg, so sorry for not answering, for some reason now and then I miss some comments! Hope you are doing well!
Date: 11/23/2014 2:32:00 PM
A beautifully written daydream...I felt every word but don't be sad, dreams can come true....just keep dreaming..take care :) Ana
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, I have been dreaming and dreaming and dreaming, and still you are not at my door!!!! :) hugs
Date: 11/23/2014 11:26:00 AM
this is absolutely beautiful and poignant. I love this. A FAVE
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:09:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, this is so very kind of you!!!!
Date: 11/22/2014 9:47:00 AM
very beautifully painted piece arthur how i know this feeling dear friend heartfelt bless you pal
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:08:00 PM
I was sure I answered the comments in this poem, but it seems not, either my wine is very good, or I am getting old, either way, thank you kindly!
Date: 11/22/2014 1:13:00 AM
Eh Art, very warm daydreaming then you sadly woke up to a brutal cold reality. lol nice and humorous! Quite enjoyed it my friend. A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Dorian, sorry for long delay, sometimes I seem to miss some comments!!!
Date: 11/20/2014 8:18:00 AM
this dreamy and sad.. but i like best your poem"sray away from my heart"...
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Olive, hugs!!! GBU
Date: 11/20/2014 7:36:00 AM
A soul never dreams of something that cannot achieve! A marvelous dream wrapped in a majestic verse, dear Arthur! A seven!
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, I sure hope you are correct!
Date: 11/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
Oh my goodness Arthur, you had me, wow your words are magic and I was under your spell, don't wake me up, that was a perfect moment.
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:32:00 PM
I had you? wow that must have been what they call a "quickie" wink wink!!!! Thanks Cas you are such a sweetie!
Date: 11/19/2014 4:27:00 PM
Very romantic, dreamy and sad. But even delusion can turn into reality. // paul
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Paul, one can dream!!!! :)
Date: 11/19/2014 12:36:00 AM
All realities begin as dreams, so don't give up on meeting her, Arthur. Love always happens when we least expect it... I really enjoyed this beautiful expression of longing. Really great writing, Arthur!
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:29:00 PM
I LOVE YOU!!!! Lets get Married!!!! wow that took me by surprise, I bet you too!!!! ( kidding ) and I agree, many things start with a dream, however in life is not what gets tossed at you its always how you choose to deal with it, both the good and the bad!!! Thanks so much Kelly!!
Date: 11/18/2014 6:47:00 PM
Oh how our dreams can taunt us. Excellent as always Arthur!
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:27:00 PM
Some-days I sure prefer the dreams! thank you so much
Date: 11/17/2014 5:04:00 PM
Awww, hopefuly you will meet her outside of the confines of dreaming!
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:17:00 PM
one can dream, oh wait , that doesn't work, I just did that!!! :) Thanks Richard
Date: 11/17/2014 4:51:00 PM
Well done my friend. Runs the roads of different emotions as it is read. Closing line, haven't we all felt that at one time or another? Great write a super 7 my friend..
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Robert! I hope you are doing well and having better times!
Date: 11/17/2014 4:26:00 PM
Love this my friend an excellent work of icy passion, that could melt the heart of any ice maiden, bravo cheri I'm glad you like my poem so much thanks for your comment of appreciation cheri
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:14:00 PM
merci a toi aussi chéri !
Date: 11/17/2014 1:57:00 PM
Arthur, I hope the spirit of poetry will brighten your day as you realize how this beautiful sad poem has reached my heart and brightened mine!
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:12:00 PM
Merci Connie, I assure you the feeling is mutual, you are very talented.
Date: 11/17/2014 9:53:00 AM
love the style in which you drew this arthur
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:11:00 PM
Thank you liam, now shhhhhhh but some good ol Irish Whiskey helped out here!!!
Date: 11/17/2014 4:59:00 AM
how poignant can dreams be, Arthur... so well done!.. huggs
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:10:00 PM
Thank you nette, sometimes when one writes a special poem, well its just so nice to get kind words as yours, I really appreciate it!
Date: 11/17/2014 1:12:00 AM
Arthur this is much more beautiful dream! It seems we are chasing ourselves away from reality now! and this is poetry.. :) Bless your heart.
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:09:00 PM
And bless you too for being so kind and generous to me! :)
Date: 11/16/2014 10:31:00 PM
Arthur, when the weather changes to gray and gloomy it does make for a lazy day, it has been the same here. :) eve
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Date: 11/16/2014 10:46:00 PM
Yes, is the season for it, hope you are doing well! Hugs