John Michaels Poet Pleiades

Kiss - Pleiades K

Kilometres ‘tween us...
Keepsakes serve to sustain
Kudos for your restrain
Knock at my door excites
Kindled passion ignites
Keeping lips pressed to mine
Keen, hungry, tongues entwine

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March 2017

For the "Pleiades K" contest sponsored by Kim Merryman - (Joint) Third Place.

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Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 3:27 PM Just swinging back to congratulate you on a wonderful well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita John Michaels April 1, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thanks so much for your continued support and encouragement! It means a lot!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2017 at 4:07 AM - Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, John :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :) John Michaels March 19, 2017 at 7:30 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Just trying new things and showing I can do more than Haiku!!

Kim Merryman March 13, 2017 at 5:15 PM A well written, "steamy" Pleiades, John! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim John Michaels March 13, 2017 at 5:20 PM Thanks, Kim - and for running the contest. I'll be keeping an eye out for your next one! John Michaels March 13, 2017 at 5:16 PM Yes, that's right - never written in this form before. I have done a lot of alliteration, so hopefully that'll help! Thank you for your enthusiastic comments as ever!

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2017 at 7:50 PM wow, John,You sure did a GREAT job . It's your first, right? what an excellent way to do it. I hope to see this one high on the winner list. John Michaels March 13, 2017 at 5:19 PM Sorry, the reply above was meant for you, but I think Kim's comments popped in before it could refresh. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos March 12, 2017 at 7:48 PM John, you're the man! Love this exciting, sensuous write! This was a big challenge using the letter "K" but you aced it, my friend! A-7! Pandita John Michaels March 13, 2017 at 5:22 PM Thank you for your amazing feedback and your continued support! Thought I would try something completely different!

Jan Allison March 12, 2017 at 5:03 PM oohh a sensual poem John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx John Michaels March 13, 2017 at 5:14 PM Thank you for your kind comments!