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Kiss of Rodin

KISS OF RODIN My body rages with your close proximity You heed the heady breathing of my heart A lover’s touch, rose petals of magnanimity The Kiss of Rodin’s rapturous sculpted art You heed the heady breathing of my heart Becoming vulnerable with aching breast The Kiss of Rodin’s rapturous sculpted art Limbs wrap around me, our lips pressed Becoming vulnerable with aching breast Voluptuous emotions, a mind-blowing high Limbs wrap around me, our lips pressed Rhythmic movements of the earth and sky Voluptuous emotions, a mind-blowing high A lover’s touch, rose petals of magnanimity Rhythmic movements of the earth and sky My body rages with your close proximity 5/30/2017 Pantoum Form
*The Kiss was sculpted by french artist Auguste Rodin

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Date: 6/29/2017 11:03:00 AM
This is fantastic! I want to try this form also. Very well written and love the topic.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Madeleine!
Date: 6/28/2017 4:34:00 AM
oh so passionate Kim I love the theme you used - you could put a picture of the sculpture for us all to see:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 6/27/2017 1:38:00 PM
A very interesting write, but the rhymes were on point, congratulations on your placement in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2017 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Juli-Michelle!
Date: 5/31/2017 5:20:00 PM
Wow Kim this was a knockout. I wrote one of these today, my very first attempt, it wasn't easy but you sure made it look that way. I love the theme and phrase choices in this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! :)

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