Kim Rodrigues Poet Pantoum

Kiss of Rodin

KISS OF RODIN

My body rages with your close proximity
You heed the heady breathing of my heart
A lover’s touch, rose petals of magnanimity
The Kiss of Rodin’s rapturous sculpted art

You heed the heady breathing of my heart
Becoming vulnerable with aching breast
The Kiss of Rodin’s rapturous sculpted art
Limbs wrap around me, our lips pressed

Becoming vulnerable with aching breast
Voluptuous emotions, a mind-blowing high
Limbs wrap around me, our lips pressed
Rhythmic movements of the earth and sky

Voluptuous emotions, a mind-blowing high
A lover’s touch, rose petals of magnanimity
Rhythmic movements of the earth and sky
My body rages with your close proximity

5/30/2017
Pantoum Form

*The Kiss was sculpted by french artist Auguste Rodin

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Madeleine Riha June 29, 2017 at 11:03 AM This is fantastic! I want to try this form also. Very well written and love the topic. Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2017 at 11:04 AM Thank you, Madeleine!

Jan Allison June 28, 2017 at 4:34 AM oh so passionate Kim I love the theme you used - you could put a picture of the sculpture for us all to see:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2017 at 5:03 AM Thanks, Jan!

Juli- Michelle June 27, 2017 at 1:38 PM A very interesting write, but the rhymes were on point, congratulations on your placement in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2017 at 8:30 PM Thank you, Juli-Michelle!

Chris Green May 31, 2017 at 5:20 PM Wow Kim this was a knockout. I wrote one of these today, my very first attempt, it wasn't easy but you sure made it look that way. I love the theme and phrase choices in this. Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2017 at 5:57 PM Thanks so much, Chris! :)