Kiss of Death

She comes on sunset colors,
Rocking in his head.
A dark and shimmering shadow
Like lace across his bed.

Beside the narrow window
The night takes up her form.
She takes his hand and beckons him
To ride the coming storm.

Frosty fingers touch his arm;
Her words a woman’s lies.
He looks into her smiling face
And knows he’s going to die.

She steps back through the window,
The stars their courses stopped.
His fate is fixed, she calls his name.
He leaps and drops the fatal drop.

The gathered crowd made judgment fast,
As sun poured light across the sky,
They saw loves smile upon his lips
But called it suicide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cohen Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Wow, extraordinary! How did I miss this before? I got goosebumps (its July 4th today).
Bush Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Hello Eric, thanks so much. Remember, something missed is future's gift.
Wolves Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Incredible write
Bush Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Thank you much. You are so sweet to wander through my maze.
Kiser Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Ooh, a hard end there; sad fate. Well done poem though.
Bush Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Thanks. Always glad when you stop by.
Lindley Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Love the creativity, dark, the depth, the smoothness, the overall imagery projected in this truly exceptional dark poetry my friend.. A fav for me, a fine gem .
Bush Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Thanks so much.
Bell Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 4:19 PM
The gentle sex. Never believe it for a minute. Was he really smiling at the end? I wonder.
Bush Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Only love will know.
House Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Really enjoyed this one.
Bush Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you.
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