Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Tanka

Kiss of Dawn

gentle kiss of dawn
sheer curtains filter sun rays
touching me with light
golden flecks ride the cool breeze
I wake to daybreaks splendor



By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
First place in One to Fifteen Any Form (Brian Strand)

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Jon Arno March 10, 2012 at 6:13 PM Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon

Charlotte Puddifoot March 7, 2012 at 4:41 PM congrats on your 1st place win; a lovely tanka, good flow, and every word perfectly placed :-)

Joyce Johnson March 7, 2012 at 12:31 PM Very nicely said. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2012 at 10:23 AM RHONDA,, ANOTHER ;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD

Wilma Neels March 7, 2012 at 9:30 AM Awesome way to wake up in the morning Rhonda :) congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest :) blessings Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 7, 2012 at 8:09 AM congrats Rhonda on a lovely first place win for this gentle write and imagery filled poem luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 7:37 AM Good Morning and Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One To Fifteen" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud March 7, 2012 at 7:10 AM cheers to you rhonda for the win!..:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi March 7, 2012 at 7:08 AM Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2012 at 9:00 PM another wow poem, Rhonda. GREAT imagery.

Bl Devnath February 27, 2012 at 11:26 AM Lovely touch with the gentle kiss of dawn, loved, bl

Charmaine Chircop February 27, 2012 at 10:26 AM soft and beautiful tanka..Charma

Nette Onclaud February 27, 2012 at 1:18 AM silky touch and feel of dawn here, rhonda.. bewildered by your fine piece!... so soft; i like!..:) huggs!

Kash Poet February 27, 2012 at 12:35 AM Very good imagery here Rhonda.Enjoyed.