kiss of autumn

a crisp august night
evokes vibrant changing leaves ~
autumn's bitter kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delaney Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 3:44 AM
Hi Tania, Bittersweet perhaps in its passing and what follows. Hugs, SuZ
Kitchin Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Suz, thank you.
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 6:26 AM
I love how concise and vivid this is! The phrase “autumn’s bitter kiss” really sticks with me — it perfectly captures that sharp, bittersweet feeling of the season changing. Short but so effective!
Kitchin Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Rowena, thank you.
Manassian Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Haiku is not an easy form. You've done it so well. Loved the sharp turn after the second ine. Autumn's kiss well soon be upon is. Thank you for your recent visit to my page.
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Eileen, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Is Autumn's kiss bitter? Better than winter though. Depends where you live.
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Victor, thank you.
Rose  Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Sometimes autumn is bitter sometimes its made of rich velvet I love fall dear heart, thanks for this poem today
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Vie, thank you.
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 2:02 PM
beautiful autumnal haiku Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Jan, thank you. -hugs
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