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for the Pyramid of Peace Poetry Contest
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Kiss Me When the Sun Sleeps

Now! kiss me when the sun sleeps under cover of evening hills. Where soft sheets shroud our sight, yet letting our feelings softly in. Within our blanket bivouac, we are buffered from the bustling world. Trusting only touch to slip through the covering cloth, silencing lying eyes. Eyes surrender gladly, leaving fingers to trace forgotten pathways. Our skin remembers what hasty eyes brushed aside in passing. Forgotten now are smiles, frowns, and doubts once misread by sight. Kiss me now - while the sun sleeps beneath our veiled skies. Kiss me through cloth- to feel what eyes forget, forgo, let go, without the joyous sense of touch.
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August 3, 2026 at 11:35 AM
I like the shape of the poem that youv created for the poem and how it goes with what youv woven. You have an artistic mind ~ and it shows. Your poem is beautiful. Thank you so much for writing. Pleasure reading ~ sending you light always Congrats on your win
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