James Fraser Poet Ottava rima

Kiss Me Quiet

It's near midnight, whilst we moonlight walk
Palm tree lined fairway, Crickets singing
Hands clenched in loving vacationed talk
Hearts in wanting pound, Batangas is bringing
We, she and I, now amidst our intending lock
Serenity is the scene blessed by lunar watch
So late, but joyous we, soon our lips are speaking

Clouds now hover as we witness natures rain
Our apartment is distant, we welcome given 
Through broken lunar light, stroking her mane
My hands in taken then, sensuously they're driven
Kiss me quiet is whispered, hearts now in reign
Walking, slowly walking, absorbing to us this night
Hearts in touching pound, Batangas has brought




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Sunita U.D Palawon August 2, 2016 at 11:46 AM A nice composition. Conveys the emotion! Congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi August 2, 2016 at 6:54 AM Congrats James, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 1, 2016 at 8:03 PM Congratulations James on the placement of the contest

Skat A May 18, 2015 at 12:43 PM so sweet. You have a way with writing, James. Enjoyed this poem. FOREVER **SKAT** James Fraser May 29, 2015 at 3:03 PM Thank you so much SKAT :) FOREVER back at you, happy weekend to you :)x

Kp Nunez May 13, 2015 at 3:10 PM Saw the familiar title in the top list and just had to read. The love and romance is almost palpable in this poem! Such flowing lines. Made more so by beautiful Batangas I and those from my country are familiar with. I smiled at the knowledge that someone I know has inspired this write. Well, I enjoyed your poem, James. Again, here's to more romantic days for both of you! A 7. Kim :-) James Fraser May 13, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thank you kindly Kim. Batangas is indeed beautiful, no beaches visited though :( maybe next time? Loved Lake Taal though :) my favourite volcano. I'm smiling at your wishes, thank you so much, hugs // James :) :)

James Peranteau April 21, 2015 at 9:07 PM Ooooo, a wonderful romantic scene here dear poet ! I'm glad I read this ! Have a good one my friend.......much love, james James Fraser April 23, 2015 at 1:12 PM Hiya James, catching up on some comments here. Always smiling when I see you here. Blessed day to you my poetry friend, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2015 at 7:22 AM Huge James, :)!!!! what can I say more but a lovely wonderful poem!! touched!!!.. :)!!!! ((warm hugs)))!olive eloisa Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 20, 2015 at 6:05 AM Well huge one, I know exactly how that feels.. :D! James Fraser April 19, 2015 at 12:31 PM Yes indeed, the wonders of being transported ;-) pure reciprocation of warm hugs//Dino James xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2015 at 10:47 AM vivid that you transpirted me there with you... :)!!!

Charmaine Chircop April 18, 2015 at 9:39 PM What a beautiful poem..It seems as someone is in love with.the Batangas and all the beauty of a she.A fav! : ) James Fraser April 19, 2015 at 12:34 PM Blessed Sunday to you Charmaine :) Ones heart has been caressed and touched by such beauty of she, and I haven't stopped smiling for weeks. Warm hugs winging their way, James :) xx

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2015 at 4:34 PM dear prince.. if this is the batangas in my country, you are soo right about it.. what a fine, splendid write,, hope you can come here.. awesome!.. huggs James Fraser April 25, 2015 at 12:24 PM The images I've seen of Batangas and the Philippines in general are absolutely wonderful, hugs always//James xx