Kiss Me

` and let’s see how long we can hold our breath. . .

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 9:50:00 PM

Beautifully crafted, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:09:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/23/2019 4:00:00 AM

Breathtaking ;-) x

Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Elaine. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2019 9:58:00 PM

I am still holding my breath on this one. Nice Chris ....Goodnight :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi. Your comments always take my breath away. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:53:00 PM

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/22/2019 3:51:00 PM

On that note I think I am going to take a long walk in this cold autumn rain ... perfect monoku btw

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 4:36:00 PM

Funny, I've had my breath taken away by a wonderful writer... : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2019 4:31:00 PM

lol...No, I can't say i have, although I have had my breath taken away by the winter winds....

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 4:15:00 PM

I don't know, it just might be fun. Ever try to hold your breath under an umbrella? : )

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2019 4:08:00 PM

An umbrella Would defeat the purpose

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 4:05:00 PM

I have an umbrella if you might need one. : ) Thank you so much Sandy

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/22/2019 3:34:00 PM

Oh my!! Your thoughts leave me breathless. Soft sigh. :) Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much Brandy.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2019 2:45:00 PM

I play that game...lol! Perfectly said! Seems to work well when my hubby heads out on a business trip. Who will let go of said liplock first? ;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thanks Kim, that does sound like fun. : )

Hello There

Date: 10/22/2019 2:41:00 PM

perfect x

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 3:13:00 PM

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