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This piece portrays the pouring out of the soul during love making... The "kiss, kiss, kiss" is meant to represent the love making act (especially through kissing), while the man take some pauses to speak from within to without!

Kiss, kiss, kiss My mind is all black out and sensual creativity, beyond me in expressions Kiss, kiss, kiss I’m beginning to share your Life’s breath crafting into you like the latest design of a trending model kiss, kiss, kiss your delicate nature which pricks the depth of my softness spreads in the columns of my senses making it so difficult to resist Kiss, kiss, kiss The world figuratively describes love in a perspective of a soft and succulent Apple refreshing with every bite Kiss, kiss, kiss but you came into my life presenting it like green grapes mixed with ripe passion fruits supplemented with strawberries and completed with the extracted juices of pineapples Kiss, kiss, kiss Leaving your presence is immediately washing an hour’s make up with a quick unnecessary bath Kiss, kiss, kiss Your companionship, a sweetener to the soft drinks of what is to come for us my pride, my conquest, my ego, my strength and all the alarms of my manliness you've put in complete silence for this reason, I submit myself to you forever translating all dreams into real passions taking the eternal drive and fueling it with lots of kisses..... kisses..... kisses

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2015 2:01:00 PM
Should I pass some chap stick??? I enjoyed your romantic musings!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/10/2015 6:28:00 AM
lol! Interesting and wonderful comment Richard. Thanks a lot for stopping by
Date: 1/28/2015 11:02:00 AM
A juicy offering. Enjoyed mmmmmmffff!! Love, daver
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much daver
Date: 1/28/2015 9:35:00 AM
Wow!! What a beautiful, romantic, write, Funom, fuel of sweet kisses.7 Blessings eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 1/27/2015 1:01:00 PM
- Many sweet kisses :) - Lovely poem, Funom - A big teddy bears hug to you from me :)) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2015 7:26:00 AM
oh my dear Anne Lise.... Thank you a million times. I really appreciate your comment. It shows you really loved my piece

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