Kiss From a Cherry Blossom On the Tree

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on a twilight limb songbird sits sipping nectar it looks like a kiss

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/23/2020 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful....I love this Haiku, and that last line wraps it in a bow!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/23/2020 4:36:00 PM

Thank you for the delightful comment, JC. :=)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2020 6:51:00 PM

Certainly! Nice!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/18/2020 9:55:00 PM

Thank so much, Kim. :=)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/18/2020 6:00:00 PM

Evelyn, Wonderful Haiku and accompanying melody. That last line, certainly does. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/18/2020 9:56:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. Very best wishes.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/18/2020 2:06:00 PM

Your top photo is of a Mejiro (Zosterops japonicus aka Japanese White-eye) an agricultural pest because it sneaks up on pollinating insects by piercing a petal and shooting its tongue through the hole to scoop them up. It also eats fruit before it can ripen, but it is attractive, so everyone loves it but farmers and orchardists! Well caught! Aloha! Rico

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/18/2020 2:46:00 PM

All animals are predators of one kind or another, it seems. Thank you for your interesting thoughts and appreciation of this poem. Aloha! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/17/2020 11:25:00 PM

Evelyn, this is EXCELLENT! Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/18/2020 1:42:00 PM

My deepest thanks for the ray of sunshine, Janice.