"kiss"

Inches away
             our lips reach
                             now they are one..
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September 3, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Sweet, Michael! weee what away to express a kiss. Should make her day,..p.d.
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September 1, 2010 at 1:33 PM
sweet! enjoyed--Thanks for your comments on my poems!
Hales Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 6:47 AM
oh kiss me ha ha ha love it ... It is the best feeling as one ... sarah x
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Nice observation. Quite scientific, Michael, hahah
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Its almost like saying should I kiss her or shouldn't I? Great senryu Michael, love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Ah, the suspense when lips are approaching for a kiss! Very nice senryu, Michael. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Luv this one ..kissy face is good and your words so romantic .. wonderful thoughts when reading Michael... and we are in Maryland on the white beaches for business and pleasure this week ..luv
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Great romantic write that is so simple..Keep the creative and romantic pen flowing..Sara
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