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Kiss

Soft lips meet Two hearts beat The feeling bliss The sensual kiss Standing still in time Hearts beat in rhyme It answers you are mine Sentient dreams entwine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 2:31:00 PM
Such sweet anticipation a kiss does acquiesce. Mac
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Date: 1/26/2010 3:18:00 PM
Oh my how sublime... this is intense and sweet to the eye... kisses are the best life has to offer... your rhymes again are perfection... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:21:00 PM
SO SWEET!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:50:00 PM
a soft listful rhyme. Thank you! -Susan Mills
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:06:00 PM
Your hearts on song today Daniel, another lovely warm piece >> James
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Date: 1/26/2010 11:03:00 AM
Beautiful Rhyme, Daniel. I love the last line in the second verse-"Sentient dreams entwine." That ties it up! Great Rhyme! Peace, Audrey
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