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As the fishing boat was leaving away from the harbour. A sad woman, with tears on her cheeks, blew a kiss to her lover, who was watching at her from the boat, while he waved. She stood up there, until the boat disappeared in the misty ocean. Seagulls flew around the cold dawn, above her confused and thoughtful head. Melancholic, she left the harbour to her daily chores. Months passed, and she went back to the same meeting point. It was still dark in the morning, and the gentle summer breeze caressed her face. Happy, with a big smile painted on her face, she saw the lights of the boat approaching. Her heart beat faster when she could see her lover waving at her. As soon as the boat docked, she jumped onto the boat to welcome her loved one with the biggest kiss for months.

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Date: 7/16/2023 4:10:00 AM
Marie, thank you for taking part in my Writing Challenge K Words !
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/16/2023 4:36:00 AM
A pleasure. Thank you Constance...!
Date: 7/14/2023 12:14:00 PM
Lovely penning Maria, with nice imagery and good expression. Blessings always,Gordon xx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/14/2023 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon. Hugs
Date: 7/12/2023 5:53:00 PM
very emotionnal, you found the true words, not an easy life to share a kiss in six months, enjoyed my reading
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/13/2023 1:57:00 AM
Thank you Yann. Hope you are enjoying summer...!
Date: 7/11/2023 11:12:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/12/2023 12:38:00 AM
Hi Jeanette. Thank you so much. Hugs
Date: 7/11/2023 3:13:00 PM
=) Thank you... we have a visionary writer in the making.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/11/2023 3:23:00 PM
Hello Martin. Thank you very much for your comment. Have a nice day..!

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