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Kintsugi

Searches for perfection abound - creams for flawless complexion, toothpaste for perfect white teeth, diets to give one an ideal figure, salves, make-up, lotions, hairspray, an endless desire not to show flaws. Why do we all aspire to be copies of Venus or Adonis or a movie star? Show me see the slightly crooked tooth In a wide smile that lights a room, A child with poor eyesight Who wears green cat’s-eye glasses, Show me a woman whose walker or cane is trimmed with spring flowers, a girl whose mousy hair sports purple streaks or a heavy woman who wears a red silk dress and heels. Show me people who understand That accenting their flaws can create That special beauty called character.

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Date: 8/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
Ah, that ability to see past the surface and into the beauty mark of the spirit - to see with God's eyes and and delight in every creation! Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/21/2021 10:59:00 AM
It is very thoughtful of you to read my work and take the time to comment. Thank you so much. I enjoyed learning about kintsugi as well.
Date: 8/20/2021 9:28:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/21/2021 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment on my work. I do so appreciate it. Learning about kintsugi was really interesting.
Date: 8/20/2021 8:15:00 PM
Love this one. Congrats on getting top ten. It was a very intriguing contest theme wasn't it? It was interesting to learn about Kintsugi as I'd never heard of it before. A beautiful poem to illustrate Kintsugi in character. Enjoyed your take on the theme ;-)
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/21/2021 10:57:00 AM
Fascinating contest and yes. I learned about kintsugi for the first time. Thank you for reading and commenting
Date: 8/14/2021 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful! And so very true. Our fixation with beauty diminishes as we age and we begin to see the real person. Your poem is a wakeup call to celebrate true beauty.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/14/2021 9:52:00 AM
You are very kind with your comments. I appreciate them especially because I admire your own poetry.
Date: 8/14/2021 5:21:00 AM
WOW! Superb theme, Barbara. Your poem mends the broken.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/14/2021 6:29:00 AM
How nice of you to read and comment on my poem. I really appreciate your lovely compliment.
Date: 8/13/2021 11:49:00 AM
Marvelous, Barbara. You've done it again...an outstanding piece of writing, well-thought-out and expertly expressed! Good writing!
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/13/2021 6:48:00 PM
I'm not absolutely sure it is what was wanted in the contest, but we will see. I do feel there is a lot of truth in it.
Date: 8/13/2021 11:39:00 AM
Well thought and scribed! It amazes me that so many people fail to realise what we REALLY find attractive is just a FAMILIAR face! Aloha! Rico
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/13/2021 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rico, for the nice compliment. I believe it's the truth.
Date: 8/13/2021 1:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Barbara, really inspiring message :)
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/13/2021 6:49:00 PM
You are so kind. Thank you for reading and making such a nice comment.

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