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Kingfisher

brilliantly colored scuba diving apparel ~ array on parade prettily perching fun, feathered festivity ~ eyes on the prizes watching and waiting intelligent inquiry ~ flickering movement mobile suit gundam beak poised in full readiness ~ instinctive appetition diving without halt flying somersault NB: Other - Haiku Sonnet form created by David Marshall; 4 haikus plus a couplet of either 5.5 or 7.7 syllables, total of 14 lines.

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/31/2023 12:05:00 PM

Wow a wonderful artistic poem on the kingfisher, you depicted it superly. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/8/2023 7:14:00 AM

Thank you my friend Zaynab!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/21/2023 12:14:00 AM

Great portrayal of the colourful Charachterful flying darting diving Delightfully daring denizen of creation Linda-Alice..'

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 7:05:00 AM

Good to have you visit Joe. Love your alliteration! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/21/2023 12:14:00 AM

Great portrayal of the colourful Charachterful flying darting diving Delightfully daring denizen of creation Linda-Alice..'

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 7:05:00 AM

Good to have you visit Joe. Love your alliteration! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 5/20/2023 1:23:00 PM

Beautiful little bird and a good entry for the contest, Linda. An unusual form, well written. Good luck and have a great weekend my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 7:04:00 AM

Hi Bill. Good to see you here. Thanks for the visit and comments! :)

Terry Flood

Date: 5/16/2023 2:56:00 PM

I’ve only seen a couple of Kingfishers and never perched. In flight they’re like a tiny luminescent metallic blue dart. Absolutely awe inspiring and beautiful. You capture that little bird wonderfully, Linda. All the best in the contest. Terry

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 7:03:00 AM

Hey Terry. They are hard to spot in trees. I hadn't thought of the dart analogy, but you are correct-great! Thanks for your read and wishes! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2023 1:46:00 AM

You did justice to this beautiful bird.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/14/2023 7:19:00 AM

Thank you dear Victor. It is a beautiful and colorful bird. hugs! :)