Kingdom Lost

In summertime, the ivy climbs,
and hides the castle wall.
The king dreams of late,
that the sea is so great,
and yet - his boat is so small.
As swift as a fox and
dark as a raven on wing,
seven hundred soldiers march  
into the valley of the king.
Long overdue, a battle ensues
flanking the powers that be.
Children cry, and good men die, 
the monarch is now on his knee…
Soon the horsemen alone 
try to maintain the throne.
But the long way around
is the shortest way home.
The evening is filled
with chaos and smoke,
and the kingdom is 
stunned by it all…
Soon the sun will go down,
and in spite of his crown, 
the king will undoubtedly fall…
His rival’s strength
was mistaken,
by a king overtaken,
his life is now but a pawn.
His authority lifted,
the power has shifted –
an era of glory is gone…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 11:42 AM
I love this piece which transports me to another place and time! Beautifully written! Hugs. Pandita
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June 12, 2018 at 2:06 PM
It's nice when my work is appreciated. Thanks!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 7:28 PM
One of the best I've read, congrats!
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February 4, 2014 at 7:55 PM
I appreciate your kind words...
Oyewole Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Enjoyable write! Big congrats to you!!
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February 4, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it...
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Cole
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February 4, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Thank you...
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 12:18 AM
hi Cole you did not date your poem so the best I could give you is a honorable mention such a shame as I would have put you 3rd I suggest you read rules very carefully as all contest sponsors have different ones congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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February 4, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Thank you...
Mehta Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on the win, Cole
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November 11, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Thank you...
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November 10, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Cole ... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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November 11, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Thank you...
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