Kingdom Lost

In summertime, the ivy climbs,
and hides the castle wall.
The king dreams of late,
that the sea is so great,
and yet - his boat is so small.
As swift as a fox and
dark as a raven on wing,
seven hundred soldiers march  
into the valley of the king.
Long overdue, a battle ensues
flanking the powers that be.
Children cry, and good men die, 
the monarch is now on his knee…
Soon the horsemen alone 
try to maintain the throne.
But the long way around
is the shortest way home.
The evening is filled
with chaos and smoke,
and the kingdom is 
stunned by it all…
Soon the sun will go down,
and in spite of his crown, 
the king will undoubtedly fall…
His rival’s strength
was mistaken,
by a king overtaken,
his life is now but a pawn.
His authority lifted,
the power has shifted –
an era of glory is gone…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/12/2018 11:42:00 AM
I love this piece which transports me to another place and time! Beautifully written! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:06:00 PM
It's nice when my work is appreciated. Thanks!
Date: 2/4/2014 7:28:00 PM
One of the best I've read, congrats!
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:55:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words...
Date: 2/4/2014 11:47:00 AM
Enjoyable write! Big congrats to you!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:53:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it...
Date: 2/4/2014 6:19:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Cole
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:57:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/4/2014 12:18:00 AM
hi Cole you did not date your poem so the best I could give you is a honorable mention such a shame as I would have put you 3rd I suggest you read rules very carefully as all contest sponsors have different ones congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:57:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 11/11/2013 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Cole
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:18:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 11/10/2013 9:25:00 PM
Cole ... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:18:00 AM
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