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King of the Licks

He's King of the Home in his high chair and gown, takin' his feedin's with dreams of bein' downtown; his jazz band was playin' he'd blow and he'd sway; he remembers those times like it was yesterday. Sneakin' drinks from old Joe, playin' cards in the back, goin' upstairs with Lil so he don't lose the knack! He's behavin' hisself, but he ain't forgot tricks he learned in the mean streets as King of the Licks!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 7:14:00 AM
Hi again!! A blazing, somewhat brazen composition...sounds like "Lil""s a Lillypop?:) Alright, I'm smiling, but it takes nothing away from the brilliance of this piece! You're a versatile and concise writer, I think you'll ace at whatever passes through your mind! God bless you and yours...Love and hugs to you..Mikki
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Date: 4/17/2009 7:20:00 AM
An interesting documentary, Keith, a romantic tale of adventure told in a funny way, brilliantly done. Great write, my friend.
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:40:00 PM
i love this king of the licks-very naughty indeed-great write-charma
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:40:00 PM
Wow, Keith! I can see the elderly gent sitting in his gown, probably drooling as he attempts to eat. But the dreams in his head - so priceless! I hope you and I have memories like this that allow us to relive our youths, like the "King of the Licks." Awesome. Sending you mail. Love, Carolyn
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