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This is an anacreontic verse inspired by The Silent One, a dedicated verse for a selflss soul, thank you silent one for inspiring us all

King Of Silence

He is silence, crowned in rosy rhymes, sprinkling balmy rain upon frail flowers. misunderstood, yet beneath his armor, is the selfless moon, bestowing starlight. when darkness unfolds, time may be cruel, but seasons can't wilt soft-spoken sagas, echoing amidst hushed sanctuaries. he shoulders the weight of a true savior. suppressing his need to be heard and seen, in a world so dark and misleading, he remains throned to an emerald garden, that glows as the king of picturesque patience. painting the wrongs right through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics, in gold across mourning skies.
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Date: 12/13/2023 3:06:00 PM
Sweet Ink….its obvious the regard, respect and admiration you have for SO! He is a very popular poet on PS and your tribute to him is heartfelt, sincere and lovely! Debx
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Date: 12/11/2023 1:35:00 AM
Brilliant. I absolutely love this! oh, yes, Silent one inspires the soul of everyone who he knows. God bless you friend. love, Gina
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Date: 12/10/2023 6:09:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2023 4:12:00 AM
Wow a really gorgeous tribute for such an amazing soul, a great poet, a kind friend, and much more! Congratulations for your placement in the contest too dear Ink! I am just in awe of your talent.. this brilliantly inked piece surely deserved to win!
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Date: 12/10/2023 4:48:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much for appreciating him. He deserves the best always grateful
Date: 12/9/2023 11:07:00 AM
This is really good. I love this poetry form!
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Date: 12/9/2023 10:08:00 PM
Thank you always dear andrea. Appreciate your support
Date: 12/8/2023 7:28:00 PM
I feel so happy to see the emergence of a few poets who paint "through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics, in gold across mourning skies. " We feel dazzled by their brilliance. This is equally a tribute to our dear friend Silent One to whom it is dedicated and also for the one who has authored it. Beautiful....
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Silent One
Date: 12/9/2023 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Valsa...
Date: 12/8/2023 5:05:00 PM
A wonderful tribute poem for a man with the heart and soul of a poet. Thank you for honoring the essence of the man, Silent One, Ink. Your beautiful imagery brings home the beauty of the heartful poet Silent One. You choose a very difficult form to write it in, my friend. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us. A FAV for my list! Hugs, Bill
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Silent One
Date: 12/9/2023 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Bill..
Date: 12/8/2023 3:55:00 PM
blessings to you for the kindness of your soul and its gift to a fellow poet
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:07:00 PM
A very kind tribute to him! What a lovely way to write of someone :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/9/2023 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Paige,she is such a little sweetie pie..
Date: 12/8/2023 1:33:00 PM
Dearest Inky, this challenging form is child 's play in your talented, poetic hands that create unforgettable images - "ever lasting acrylics," "bestowing starlight," "painting the wrongs right." Words bow to your poetic soul and artistry of your pen. Wonderful tribute for SO - a very special, multi-talented artist! Thank you! Blessings to you on butterfly wings, dear friend!
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Silent One
Date: 12/9/2023 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Sam..
Date: 12/8/2023 12:01:00 PM
So heartfelt and graceful. Worthy tribute to SO, Ink.
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Date: 12/8/2023 10:10:00 AM
Great poem which SO inspired. So well written.
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Date: 12/8/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much victor. Hope you are doing well
Date: 12/8/2023 10:06:00 AM
Although anacreontic verse can be challenging to achieve in terms of flow, this particular piece is excellent. Such sweetness... It is always appreciated to recognize those who inspire. Indeed, Silent One deserves such praise as he is one of the most exquisite muse writing skills, and your eloquence pays homage to a remarkable individual.
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Date: 12/8/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto i appreciate your support always. Yes silent one is a profound and inspiring word weaver. As are you. Grateful that you agree with me too
Date: 12/8/2023 8:13:00 AM
Your "King Of Silence" has been painted with lovely words. Love It...  Silent One inspires me and many others. I hope he knows that. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Silent One
Date: 12/8/2023 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Paula..
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:21:00 AM
I hope so too thank you paula for your kindness always grateful
Date: 12/8/2023 8:05:00 AM
Ahh!! So nice of you to honor him in such a nice work. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much sara appreciate your visit too
Date: 12/8/2023 7:51:00 AM
This is very sweet, but I am not worthy of such praise, just an ordinary guy writing ordinary poetry... some find it nice, some not.. such is the subjective nature of words.. however, I appreciate your kind gesture and efforts in doing so.. You did this form so well, I posted an old one, I should do another one that is recent.. Thank you.
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:22:00 AM
Ahh yes, but in the world of gold, a gem is still a gem, you are not just a poetic gem but so much more. Appreciate you. Always
Date: 12/8/2023 7:30:00 AM
A very enchanting and soulful tribute for the inspiring 'King Of Silence".Gosh, my dear Ink, you've really brought out the deep hues here with such pristine wordsmithery and pristine flow of words in this beautiful anacreontic verse.I can't help but be awestruck by the imageries you've woven here and acknowledged his wonderful heart..Reflecting strength of his soul and compassion within! "crowned in rosy rhymes, sprinkling balmy rain upon frail flowers", "he remains throned to an emerald garden"
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Silent One
Date: 12/8/2023 9:43:00 AM
You are very sweet Hiya...Thank you
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Ahhh thank you so much my angelic star for being so supportive and seeing beauty in everything i weave. Appreciate your kindness always
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Date: 12/8/2023 7:32:00 AM
Silent one is surely going to loveeee this. "beneath his armor, is the selfless moon" Your descriptions are beyond ethereal my dear poetess.. Ah, I can go on and on... So many amazing lines here, this is absolutely one of my favorites from you.. "painting the wrongs right through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics" Amazing!!! Magically knitted with heavenly words..
Date: 12/8/2023 7:15:00 AM
i like anacreontic verse, and it's not always easy to get the flow right, but this is a good 'un! appreciate my placement in your recent contest, and your in depth commentary :)
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:24:00 AM
Its an absolute pleasure, ah, i loved your poem, its never easy judging. Appreciate your kind support truly
Date: 12/8/2023 7:07:00 AM
So sweet … it’s always nice to acknowledge who inspires one . Great write
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Date: 12/8/2023 8:24:00 AM
True thank you dahlin
Date: 12/8/2023 7:05:00 AM
Dear Ink, Silent One does have one of the most beautiful gardens ever seen on earth, and you tell it like it is, great tribute to a special man , thanks for sharing.
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Silent One
Date: 12/8/2023 9:44:00 AM
Thank you for yourbkind words
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Date: 12/8/2023 7:08:00 AM
Awwn he is isnt he thank you sweet rose i appreciate your kindness and if it wasnt for him i wouldnt have met you so thanks to him for that too sendinv you light always
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