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This is an anacreontic verse inspired by The Silent One, a dedicated verse for a selflss soul, thank you silent one for inspiring us all

King Of Silence

He is silence, crowned in rosy rhymes, sprinkling balmy rain upon frail flowers. misunderstood, yet beneath his armor, is the selfless moon, bestowing starlight. when darkness unfolds, time may be cruel, but seasons can't wilt soft-spoken sagas, echoing amidst hushed sanctuaries. he shoulders the weight of a true savior. suppressing his need to be heard and seen, in a world so dark and misleading, he remains throned to an emerald garden, that glows as the king of picturesque patience. painting the wrongs right through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics, in gold across mourning skies.
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M  Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Sweet Ink….its obvious the regard, respect and admiration you have for SO! He is a very popular poet on PS and your tribute to him is heartfelt, sincere and lovely! Debx
Mcintosh Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 1:35 AM
Brilliant. I absolutely love this! oh, yes, Silent one inspires the soul of everyone who he knows. God bless you friend. love, Gina
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
Iqbal Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Wow a really gorgeous tribute for such an amazing soul, a great poet, a kind friend, and much more! Congratulations for your placement in the contest too dear Ink! I am just in awe of your talent.. this brilliantly inked piece surely deserved to win!
Empress Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 4:48 AM
Awwn thank you so much for appreciating him. He deserves the best always grateful
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 11:07 AM
This is really good. I love this poetry form!
Empress Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 10:08 PM
Thank you always dear andrea. Appreciate your support
George Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:28 PM
I feel so happy to see the emergence of a few poets who paint "through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics, in gold across mourning skies. " We feel dazzled by their brilliance. This is equally a tribute to our dear friend Silent One to whom it is dedicated and also for the one who has authored it. Beautiful....
One Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Valsa...
Baker Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 5:05 PM
A wonderful tribute poem for a man with the heart and soul of a poet. Thank you for honoring the essence of the man, Silent One, Ink. Your beautiful imagery brings home the beauty of the heartful poet Silent One. You choose a very difficult form to write it in, my friend. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us. A FAV for my list! Hugs, Bill
One Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Bill..
Parker Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:55 PM
blessings to you for the kindness of your soul and its gift to a fellow poet
Hind Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:07 PM
A very kind tribute to him! What a lovely way to write of someone :)
One Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Thanks Paige,she is such a little sweetie pie..
Kauffman Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Dearest Inky, this challenging form is child 's play in your talented, poetic hands that create unforgettable images - "ever lasting acrylics," "bestowing starlight," "painting the wrongs right." Words bow to your poetic soul and artistry of your pen. Wonderful tribute for SO - a very special, multi-talented artist! Thank you! Blessings to you on butterfly wings, dear friend!
One Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Thanks Sam..
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM
So heartfelt and graceful. Worthy tribute to SO, Ink.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Great poem which SO inspired. So well written.
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Thank you so very much victor. Hope you are doing well
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Although anacreontic verse can be challenging to achieve in terms of flow, this particular piece is excellent. Such sweetness... It is always appreciated to recognize those who inspire. Indeed, Silent One deserves such praise as he is one of the most exquisite muse writing skills, and your eloquence pays homage to a remarkable individual.
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto i appreciate your support always. Yes silent one is a profound and inspiring word weaver. As are you. Grateful that you agree with me too
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Your "King Of Silence" has been painted with lovely words. Love It...  Silent One inspires me and many others. I hope he knows that. Have a blessed day writing away...................
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Thank you for your kind words Paula..
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:21 AM
I hope so too thank you paula for your kindness always grateful
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Ahh!! So nice of you to honor him in such a nice work. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much sara appreciate your visit too
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:51 AM
This is very sweet, but I am not worthy of such praise, just an ordinary guy writing ordinary poetry... some find it nice, some not.. such is the subjective nature of words.. however, I appreciate your kind gesture and efforts in doing so.. You did this form so well, I posted an old one, I should do another one that is recent.. Thank you.
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Ahh yes, but in the world of gold, a gem is still a gem, you are not just a poetic gem but so much more. Appreciate you. Always
Sharma  Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:30 AM
A very enchanting and soulful tribute for the inspiring 'King Of Silence".Gosh, my dear Ink, you've really brought out the deep hues here with such pristine wordsmithery and pristine flow of words in this beautiful anacreontic verse.I can't help but be awestruck by the imageries you've woven here and acknowledged his wonderful heart..Reflecting strength of his soul and compassion within! "crowned in rosy rhymes, sprinkling balmy rain upon frail flowers", "he remains throned to an emerald garden"
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 9:43 AM
You are very sweet Hiya...Thank you
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Ahhh thank you so much my angelic star for being so supportive and seeing beauty in everything i weave. Appreciate your kindness always
Sharma  Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Silent one is surely going to loveeee this. "beneath his armor, is the selfless moon" Your descriptions are beyond ethereal my dear poetess.. Ah, I can go on and on... So many amazing lines here, this is absolutely one of my favorites from you.. "painting the wrongs right through butterfly strokes, of everlasting acrylics" Amazing!!! Magically knitted with heavenly words..
Puddifoot Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:15 AM
i like anacreontic verse, and it's not always easy to get the flow right, but this is a good 'un! appreciate my placement in your recent contest, and your in depth commentary :)
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Its an absolute pleasure, ah, i loved your poem, its never easy judging. Appreciate your kind support truly
Rhymes Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:07 AM
So sweet … it’s always nice to acknowledge who inspires one . Great write
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 8:24 AM
True thank you dahlin
Rose  Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Dear Ink, Silent One does have one of the most beautiful gardens ever seen on earth, and you tell it like it is, great tribute to a special man , thanks for sharing.
One Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Thank you for yourbkind words
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Awwn he is isnt he thank you sweet rose i appreciate your kindness and if it wasnt for him i wouldnt have met you so thanks to him for that too sendinv you light always
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