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King of Flame

King of flame, you are
                                               Out of globe but majestic
                                                  Burn the skin quickly

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2013

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June 23, 2013 at 10:38 AM

Strong feeling for loved one touches quickly so awe inspiring. Excellent secret of love. Loved always, bl

June 23, 2013 at 5:04 AM

I don't believe King SOL ever had such praise... Well done, my friend.... Well done indeed.... Jake

June 23, 2013 at 7:32 AM

thanks John

Ravi Sathasivam

June 15, 2013 at 11:52 PM

Excellent. Well penned. tfs

June 23, 2013 at 8:40 AM

thanks u

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 15, 2013 at 10:20 AM

Wonderfully done very dynamic and heart burning!

June 23, 2013 at 7:33 AM

thank u Dem

Mustapha Mohammed

June 15, 2013 at 2:49 AM

Nicely done Elai,I like it.

June 23, 2013 at 8:41 AM

like also ur poems

June 15, 2013 at 12:45 AM

That's why it is good to have a dependable sunscreen when you are outdoors. Nice write.

June 15, 2013 at 12:48 AM

hehehe big correct!

June 13, 2013 at 10:28 AM

i feel the simmering heat, so well done.. i like!..:) huggs

June 13, 2013 at 9:58 AM

Heh, if you play with fire...excellent job! :)

June 12, 2013 at 10:01 AM

Good imaging in a perfect Haiku

Richard Lamoureux

June 12, 2013 at 8:22 AM

I like it.

June 11, 2013 at 3:47 AM

napaso ka siguro kaya mo nasulat to nuh? Nice!

June 12, 2013 at 7:34 AM

hehehe correct! swimming swimming din pag may time NAto hahaha,... thank yah

June 9, 2013 at 8:35 AM

yes to this one.. great aha moment on the 3rd line... well done!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2013 at 4:11 PM

an enjoyable Haiku Elai, ~alaways, Lidna

Mustapha Mohammed

June 7, 2013 at 6:39 AM

Nicely penned Elai,haiku's is a favourite of mines

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 7, 2013 at 1:45 AM

- True, well done Elai! - Have a delicious weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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