King Louis

King Louis of France
Was looked on by many askance
Then the people said fooey to Louis
And made their selection: Chop Suey

Old King Louis got everything wrong
Told his wife in a touching swan song
“I think it’s for the best
Get it off of my chest”
Made his exit quite short, not so long

King Louis in or out of doors
Loved to dress in silky drawers

When asked  “Do they feel alright?”
He said: ”Yes, when they’re pulled up tight”


27 August 2019
Clerimerick Couplets Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney
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Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:22 PM
hahaha LOVE how you did all these. Oh my, I need to hurry fast and do some!!
Brewer Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am sure you will come up with some beauties.
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August 29, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Well spotted, Gershon. I resisted borrowing his best rhyme: ‘the worst since Louis the first’. Thanks for the wishes.
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:51 AM
A touch of good old Alan Sherman in this one... Good luck in the contest!! ~ gw
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