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Kinetic Visuals

Aiming for a perfect range, I click in strobe-like effect, feeling the pumping sensation in the blood: the twitch on my hands peaks until the frames connect to this heart on days when my pupils release a thrill of wonder in a field trailing miraculously on nature’s expanse. And life’s fleeting motions are tucked into a scenic romance never to be seen in same way. Yet, as flashes of instances are arranged in a collage of dreams , images portraying those I loved, encountered, and never known … but tattooed on skin of memory’s seasons. Contest: SandyIvyDavis Viewing Life Through a Lens by nette onclaud

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/7/2013 12:12:00 PM

At first I thought you were playing a game of hide and go seek. I like how you let us see the world through your lens.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/7/2013 12:08:00 PM

Hi Nette, I do not know you well but I did see a great outpouring of love while you were away and that speaks volumes as to the person you are. Welcome back.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/13/2013 9:29:00 AM

I will check in with you now and again until your membership expires. Your poetry will always reign here, no one writes like you, no one ever will. And your energy, positivity, is soooo missed, doll. But if you are happy elsewhere, then I am happy FOR YOU. Still, give a toodle, okay? xox love sent!

Robert Ball

Date: 2/28/2013 12:31:00 PM

Nette, thank you for kind comments, I have been sick lately and have not been able to post so please forgive me if I haven't answered you, you my dear are fabolous in your poetry, you take a back seat to no one. I see that you haven't posted in a while if your health is bad then I truly understand as I have gone through itlately myself, if you have other reasons then it's your business, but in any case don't give it up you have God given talent. God bless robert

James Peranteau

Date: 2/2/2013 7:11:00 PM

An amazing write dear poet ! It was nice to read you again Nette ! This write was really fantastic ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2013 1:24:00 AM

hi Nette luv ..have so missed your talented writes but had huge health crisis to handle ..on mend now but oh so slow .. grateful to be alive and share your elegant poems my friend ..how r u???

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/29/2013 8:20:00 PM

Hi Nette, we somehow get disconnected which wasn't in th4e plan. Great to be hear and read your fantastic energy flowig through this amazing write. You capture so much wonderful imagery in this poem! Love, Elizabeth

Painted Hunter

Date: 1/25/2013 5:46:00 PM

Hi nette! I almost forgot how good you were. I always love it.

David Williams

Date: 1/17/2013 8:46:00 AM

Nette please get in touch if you are able,, miss you and your stunning beautiful words...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2013 4:56:00 PM

Reads like a view from a camera lens..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 11:24:00 AM

Dear Nette, I am viewing the last post you made, so lovely, and wondering, where have you gone?? I sure do hope you are ok, sweetie!!! Let us know!!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/2/2013 8:52:00 PM

Miss you, my friend (and your poems too)...I am going to assume you are just busy?...Hope I am right...PLEASE let me hear from you, okay?...From your faithful (and worried) friend - Tim

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2013 1:29:00 PM

awesome write, Nette. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/30/2012 5:29:00 AM

ARE YOU OKAY? Please, just one line? I can't recall seeing you here since that storm and I had felt that you were safe, but now I am VERY worried. If you have had enough, I understand... just gimme a wave?? Please, just let me know. Between your health concerns and the Phillipine weather... and my imagination... I am thinking very bad/sad things. You are very missed. XOX Cyndi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2012 1:08:00 PM

Miss you Nette !!! A quick visit to your nice poem. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/10/2012 8:25:00 PM

Another wow!SO much to like here, but I was held spellbound by the word KNIGHTING, what a perfect image, a snapshot! I saw what you wrote, easily. This should top the list. Hugs, Cyndi

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/10/2012 7:57:00 AM

Oh mercy me...here you go again!...can't even pick out a favorite line on this one...okay, the last one! No, the third one! The..oh well, never mind...

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2012 8:59:00 AM

Hey Nette, just checkin up on you. Hope you are safe saw on the news of the typhoon in your country! *hugs* Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/8/2012 1:41:00 PM

nette, you capture the intense focus needed to capture the many spaces and places we find beautiful, congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Nette. Love Carol

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/4/2012 5:23:00 AM

super congrats friend Nette on your win...i like it!!hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2012 6:11:00 PM

Nette. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 12/3/2012 4:28:00 PM

Congrats :-) Sandy

David Williams

Date: 12/3/2012 1:12:00 PM

nette, this is a fabulous write, I loved it from start to finish, well done and it's nice to read you again...David

Len Gasun

Date: 12/3/2012 9:30:00 AM

This is a marvelous write my dear friend!I love it so much. This is a winner for me! Well wish you all the best and luck for a big win! So bz ka pa ba? love always, Leonora