Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Kinetic Visuals

Aiming for a perfect range, I click 
in strobe-like effect, feeling the pumping
sensation in the blood: the twitch on my
hands peaks until the frames connect 
to this heart on days when my pupils
release a thrill of wonder in a field
trailing miraculously on nature’s expanse.
And life’s fleeting motions are tucked into
a scenic romance never to be seen in same way.
Yet, as flashes of instances are
arranged in a collage of dreams ,
images portraying those I loved, encountered,
and never known … but
tattooed on skin of memory’s seasons.


Contest: SandyIvyDavis Viewing Life Through a Lens
by nette onclaud

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Richard Lamoureux April 7, 2013 at 12:12 PM At first I thought you were playing a game of hide and go seek. I like how you let us see the world through your lens.

Richard Lamoureux April 7, 2013 at 12:08 PM Hi Nette, I do not know you well but I did see a great outpouring of love while you were away and that speaks volumes as to the person you are. Welcome back.

Cyndi Macmillan March 13, 2013 at 9:29 AM I will check in with you now and again until your membership expires. Your poetry will always reign here, no one writes like you, no one ever will. And your energy, positivity, is soooo missed, doll. But if you are happy elsewhere, then I am happy FOR YOU. Still, give a toodle, okay? xox love sent!

Robert Ball February 28, 2013 at 12:31 PM Nette, thank you for kind comments, I have been sick lately and have not been able to post so please forgive me if I haven't answered you, you my dear are fabolous in your poetry, you take a back seat to no one. I see that you haven't posted in a while if your health is bad then I truly understand as I have gone through itlately myself, if you have other reasons then it's your business, but in any case don't give it up you have God given talent. God bless robert

James Peranteau February 2, 2013 at 7:11 PM An amazing write dear poet ! It was nice to read you again Nette ! This write was really fantastic ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 30, 2013 at 1:24 AM hi Nette luv ..have so missed your talented writes but had huge health crisis to handle ..on mend now but oh so slow .. grateful to be alive and share your elegant poems my friend ..how r u???

Elizabeth Wesley January 29, 2013 at 8:20 PM Hi Nette, we somehow get disconnected which wasn't in th4e plan. Great to be hear and read your fantastic energy flowig through this amazing write. You capture so much wonderful imagery in this poem! Love, Elizabeth

Painted Hunter January 25, 2013 at 5:46 PM Hi nette! I almost forgot how good you were. I always love it.

David Williams January 17, 2013 at 8:46 AM Nette please get in touch if you are able,, miss you and your stunning beautiful words...David

Sara Kendrick January 9, 2013 at 4:56 PM Reads like a view from a camera lens..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2013 at 11:24 AM Dear Nette, I am viewing the last post you made, so lovely, and wondering, where have you gone?? I sure do hope you are ok, sweetie!!! Let us know!!

Tim Ryerson January 2, 2013 at 8:52 PM Miss you, my friend (and your poems too)...I am going to assume you are just busy?...Hope I am right...PLEASE let me hear from you, okay?...From your faithful (and worried) friend - Tim

Jack Horne January 1, 2013 at 1:29 PM awesome write, Nette. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Cyndi Macmillan December 30, 2012 at 5:29 AM ARE YOU OKAY? Please, just one line? I can't recall seeing you here since that storm and I had felt that you were safe, but now I am VERY worried. If you have had enough, I understand... just gimme a wave?? Please, just let me know. Between your health concerns and the Phillipine weather... and my imagination... I am thinking very bad/sad things. You are very missed. XOX Cyndi

Anne-Lise Andresen December 23, 2012 at 1:08 PM Miss you Nette !!! A quick visit to your nice poem. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /

Cyndi Macmillan December 10, 2012 at 8:25 PM Another wow!SO much to like here, but I was held spellbound by the word KNIGHTING, what a perfect image, a snapshot! I saw what you wrote, easily. This should top the list. Hugs, Cyndi

Tim Ryerson December 10, 2012 at 7:57 AM Oh mercy me...here you go again!...can't even pick out a favorite line on this one...okay, the last one! No, the third one! The..oh well, never mind...

Wilma Neels December 9, 2012 at 8:59 AM Hey Nette, just checkin up on you. Hope you are safe saw on the news of the typhoon in your country! *hugs* Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 8, 2012 at 1:41 PM nette, you capture the intense focus needed to capture the many spaces and places we find beautiful, congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 7:07 AM Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Nette. Love Carol

Bukang Liwayway December 4, 2012 at 5:23 AM super congrats friend Nette on your win...i like it!!hugs

Poet Destroyer A December 3, 2012 at 6:11 PM Nette. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

Sandy Ivy D December 3, 2012 at 4:28 PM Congrats :-) Sandy

David Williams December 3, 2012 at 1:12 PM nette, this is a fabulous write, I loved it from start to finish, well done and it's nice to read you again...David

Len Gasun December 3, 2012 at 9:30 AM This is a marvelous write my dear friend!I love it so much. This is a winner for me! Well wish you all the best and luck for a big win! So bz ka pa ba? love always, Leonora

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