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lone girl with her cat

maybe sad

but survives life's storms










06 August 2015
Pretty Little Lunes Contest- No. 4
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich


*inspired by the story of Broken Wings and her cat.
**sorry, had to change the form belatedly to verse
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Muideen Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 2:03 AM
I burst into laughing as I read this wonderful penned piece..................A.M.
Duncan Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:45 AM
This is a nice win :)
Merryman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:15 PM
A sweet write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim M.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:30 PM
What a wonderful imagery Kim! Congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Kim, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:19 AM
It is sweet that you were inspired by Broken Wings blog about her cat. It's a nice piece, Kim.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:44 AM
I'm sure Broken Wings was touched by your poem - congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Survival of the storms, I like that...nicely done and grats on your win ;)
Callus Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 4:17 AM
Pleased to see this one on the winners' list, Kim:) Hugs ~ paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:40 AM
sweet of you to think of Constance with this one. Congrats in my contest, Kim.
Neels Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:52 PM
This is awesome piece Kim ;) absolutely love it!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Ooooh, I love it!!! Felines are fabulous, loving and loyal, and the strength of the vision is inspiring. Always, Laura
Bordner Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Strong woman with her song, maybe alone, although sings of love all her own...your poem, and picture are spiritually insightful Kim...J.A.B.
Scott Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Beautiful piece Kim!!! God bless you!!!
La France Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Kim, beautiful and sort of sad , 7, and thanks for visiting my weeping poem
Callus Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Hi Kim! I love both this poem and the visual that inspired it. #7 ~ I see the same picture as an expression of innocent feline allure! ~ Hugs // paul
Muideen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:34 AM
A well written piece KIM, excellence.........A.M.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Magnetizing, dear Kim. Good luck.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Kim, this is such a very clever and inspirational Lune that I enjoyed reading! Good luck in the contest and I expect to see this on the winners list! Pandita
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Spectacular! A7
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