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Kindle and Quench

Your touch plugs me in,
Lights my body from within,
Fills my veins with liquid light 
Till my dormant heart ignites
To be moulded like blown glass -
An urn to hold this cooling ash.

Copyright © Heather Ober | Year Posted 2012

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/31/2013 1:57:00 PM and another little one I remember! Sure do enjoy these five-liners you do! Glad you liked the poem you inspired me to do! thanks, Heather. Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 3/15/2013 6:37:00 AM I see you won one of Debbie's contests with this one. I can see why...it's Electric!...hot and cold too. It's talent to be able to capture someone with only a few lines. To your question...It' been a long time ago that I was in Nova Scotia. It was a family trip when I was young. We went to a national park. I think it was Highland Nat. Park...does that sound right? Anyway, it was beautiful and I saw a moose for the first and only time since! Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 12/20/2012 10:58:00 AM Well done, don't ever stop writing. The world of Poetry would never be the same... Love You dearly..... Jake Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/7/2012 11:11:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Heather. Love Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/6/2012 10:01:00 PM wow, now HERE is a gem I had not seen yet!! and also I see it won the contest. BIG congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/6/2012 6:57:00 PM Excellent poem!Love the last two lines very much.Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 12/6/2012 12:47:00 PM Very nice... Congrats on your win... Terry Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/5/2012 10:54:00 PM Warmest congrats on a wonderful win. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/5/2012 7:57:00 PM nice win~SKAT Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/5/2012 6:27:00 AM Goodmorning! Thanks so much for writing for my contest! So many different and unusual metaphors [I'm a sucker for good simile & metaphor!..please soup mail me your address for your prize] Congrad's on your winnning entry. Light & Love Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/5/2012 1:51:00 AM Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 12/5/2012 1:41:00 AM Congratulations on your awesome win friend Heather.. I like it...cheers!! :) Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 12/5/2012 12:55:00 AM Congratulations Heather.........Seren Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 12/4/2012 10:20:00 PM Congratulations on your fabulous win my dear Heather! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/4/2012 7:45:00 PM congrats Heather on a stunning write and win luv .. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/4/2012 7:09:00 PM Congratulations Heather love xx Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 12/4/2012 6:30:00 PM A brilliant piece of writing , A Big Congrats!! Jag Login to Reply

James Tate Date: 12/4/2012 5:29:00 PM A real twister you captured for us here. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/4/2012 4:45:00 PM Heather, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/3/2012 12:10:00 PM what a a smasher Heather xx Login to Reply