Kindhearted, Gentle and Forgiving

For Dane Ann's Kindhearted contest(Thanks for the challenge)

Love me when I am sick, blue and unlovable
Hold my hand when I am afraid
Talk to me when I am quiet
Listen when I want to talk
Don't push when I am slow
Run across the meadow by my side
Wipe my tears when I cry
Never leave me!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations Doris. I hope you have someone in your life who lives up to this. Love, Joyce
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April 19, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in the contest... sweet words for a sweet win from a sweet lady..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 19, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your success in Dane's contest. Agape, Moses
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April 19, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your victory in Dane Ann's contest with this excellent poem, Doris! Love, Carolyn
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March 22, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..I guess if the Healthcare thing passes the Senate we will soon know what is in there.Mom..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Mom
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March 22, 2010 at 9:14 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Doris. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 12:25 AM
There is so much to bear besides someone who is special for us. The rightful caring when they needed us. A beautiful poem on someone so dear to us. (^_^) Noel.
Lopez Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 7:50 PM
these are attributes of a nuturing person ... good job Doris.
Cooper Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 7:48 PM
It is so lovely to see that others can still dream of something so rare! beautiful
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March 21, 2010 at 7:23 PM
One who stands by you through adversity is a treasure. Hang on to them, Doris! And best wishes for success in the contest with your beautiful, heartfelt poem. Love, Carolyn
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March 21, 2010 at 6:44 PM
To be wanted for who we are, in all our different moods is surely a great kindness and love. well written Doris...cheers Margaret
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