Kind Woman, Womankind

Brutes, in name of God, to show their might, fixed laws, that you’d succumb like measly sheep. Womankind, kind woman, rise and fight. Innocents of war with smiles once bright, ravished; tossed like garbage in a heap, angels hovering nigh have you in sight. Faithful brides, for something less than trite, set on fire in their beds as they sleep. Kind woman, womankind, your soul‘s in flight. Girls in huts, legs spread, cry out in fright. A ritual to mutilate cuts deep. Angels from on high do hear your plight. Wives in their own homes (not all is right), beaten, hush their children not to weep. Womankind, kind woman, comes the night. . . . Sisters, don’t be wearied by the blight. For what they sow, God’s told us they shall reap. Angels have prepared you robes of white. Kind woman, womankind, hold tight your light. For the 'TRIBUTE TO WOMEN' Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/31/2016 4:07:00 PM
Andrea - this is a powerful piece. I'm so glad it placed highly in this contest. Soupmail. luv Michael
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement Andrea. This is so sad because it is true and facing this reality of women suffering must be of consequence to all women and men alike, to put a stop to it. Very moving Andrea and worthy of first place in my eye. 7
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Date: 7/29/2016 1:16:00 PM
You must have campaign for women's voting rights in a another lifetime. You sound like a suffragette. Its an inspirational poem for all women, worldwide. Well penned. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:42:00 PM
Good one Andrea,, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2016 12:23:00 PM
Very nice inspiration to women. A great poem my friend. A 7. hugs, cloudy poet
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Date: 7/28/2016 7:14:00 AM
A great poem for exposing these cultures that brutalize their women. So heartfelt. Congratulations on your placement. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 7/28/2016 12:00:00 AM
This is great words for women empowerment Andrea. Well done. Congrats on your win. Sunita
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:47:00 PM
Hi Andrea,, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2014 5:53:00 PM
Enjoying this one again Andrea, congrats....SKAT
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win. You wrote a great piece here. It speaks down to the core and makes all the emotions twist.
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:25:00 PM
deeply felt within my flesh... a real story of womankind... !!! You touched our soul with this wonderful write, Andie!!! well deserved a first rank... CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ^_^
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:23:00 AM
Wow........this is one I had not seen before....."I AM Woman.....hear me roar!"..... There is such a serious message that stands tall with courage. Women have to speak up, band together, and hold tight the light. Well done.!
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Date: 4/15/2014 8:30:00 AM
Disturbing and unfortunately many have endured this sad reality. Congratulations on your win Andrea.
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:02:00 AM
Excellent, honest, sad, scary, beautiful. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your no. 1, It's sad these things still have to change. Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2014 11:51:00 PM
Very powerful words that carry a positive message of hope. This is an amazing poem, Andrea! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:41:00 PM
This is an awesome poem Andrea....read it twice ...brings tears....congratulations ...
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Andrea! Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/5/2013 10:04:00 AM
powerful.....congrats on your win
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:57:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:09:00 AM
Andrea, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:28:00 AM
Andrea its great to see you in revolutionary attire. Great poem,really touches. Its really bad that even in this modern era such atrocities continue. great poem.Congrats or the win (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:45:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks so much for entering my contest. This is a beautiful piece. I was happy to see your name on my winners list.
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Date: 5/15/2012 3:11:00 PM
wonderful poem this, packs a punch, like it. or i just realized it won a contest recently, congrats and well deserved. harry
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Date: 5/9/2012 11:24:00 AM
Andrea congrats on a super win..David
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