Kimo-Cgh

petrified with fright as I awaken
to wonder who hears my pleas,
a cool cloth in mom’s hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 1:28 PM
The emotion comes through nicely. Congrats on your win, Charles. Kim
Pettit Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 11:19 PM
Good work Charles. Congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Congrats on your win. Love that last line. What a cute avatar.
Stanley Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Charles, a very nicely written Kimo, Congratulations on your win. Season’s Greetings and Merry Christmas.
Quigley Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Digs out some very old memories Charles. Congratulations
Williams Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Charles congrats on your win, hope you will enter my first contest..David
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Chris D. Aechtner "Kimo" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 10:59 PM
I LIKE this one a lot,Charles.
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 3:11 PM
excellent kimo Charles, good luck with this wonderful contest entry. harry
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