Kimo

Merabules cross the iridescent sea

Light crafts metamorphose

Seek to find is ordered












Kimo -- Three lines Contest.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:08:00 PM

Theresa,, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/11/2014 3:56:00 AM

Hi, Thank you for reading and I appreciate your positive comment. Regards Theresa xx

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:03:00 AM

THERESA,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/8/2014 8:43:00 AM

Hi, So pleased that you enjoyed the kimo. Thank you for the congrats. Regards Theresa xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/2/2014 7:00:00 AM

very lovely poem Theresa congrats on win hugs

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/4/2014 9:14:00 AM

Hi Shadow, So pleased to receive your very kind comment and congrats. Regards Theresa xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2014 5:12:00 AM

I love the sound of the mystery word 'merabules'...it goes hand in hand with the iridescent sea. congrats on your win. // paul

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/4/2014 9:17:00 AM

Hi Paul, Good of you to read and I am happy to read that you loved the descriptive words, thank you for commenting and for sending congrats. All the best, Theresa xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/1/2014 12:04:00 PM

Very well written Theresa ! Worthy great win congrats !

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/1/2014 3:24:00 PM

Hi, I am most grateful to receive your lovely comments and appreciate you taking the time to read. All the best Theresa xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2014 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, theresa

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/1/2014 3:22:00 PM

Hi, Good of you to read and send your kind comments. Thank you. Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:34:00 PM

HEy, congrats, I see you on the winners' list!!!

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/1/2014 3:21:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Always pleased to receive your support. Thank you. Regards, Theresa xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/31/2014 9:03:00 PM

Merabules not in my Oxford Dictionary but it makes for a great poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/1/2014 3:17:00 PM

Hi Joyce Thank you for your visiting. I am pleased you like this kimo. Merabules was a word that popped into my head. It can be anything you imagine it to be as it is science fiction based. I appreciate your kind congrats. Regards Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2014 10:01:00 PM

OOOH, I love that image of iridescent sea!!! Wish I had more time here tonight. Hopefully I can see more of your poetry later!!

Theresa Stephens
Date: 6/1/2014 3:34:00 PM

Hi Andrea, So pleased,as always, to read your very kind comments. I am so grateful that you take the time to read my poems. All the best Theresa xx

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