Kimo

Merabules cross the iridescent sea

Light crafts metamorphose

Seek to find is ordered












Kimo -- Three lines Contest.

science fictionkimo

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Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2014 at 8:08 PM

Theresa,, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA

Theresa Stephens

June 11, 2014 at 3:56 AM

Hi, Thank you for reading and I appreciate your positive comment. Regards Theresa xx

Skat A

June 8, 2014 at 8:03 AM

THERESA,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

Theresa Stephens

June 8, 2014 at 8:43 AM

Hi, So pleased that you enjoyed the kimo. Thank you for the congrats. Regards Theresa xx

Shadow Hamilton

June 2, 2014 at 7:00 AM

very lovely poem Theresa congrats on win hugs

Theresa Stephens

June 4, 2014 at 9:14 AM

Hi Shadow, So pleased to receive your very kind comment and congrats. Regards Theresa xx

Paul Callus

June 2, 2014 at 5:12 AM

I love the sound of the mystery word 'merabules'...it goes hand in hand with the iridescent sea. congrats on your win. // paul

Theresa Stephens

June 4, 2014 at 9:17 AM

Hi Paul, Good of you to read and I am happy to read that you loved the descriptive words, thank you for commenting and for sending congrats. All the best, Theresa xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 1, 2014 at 12:04 PM

Very well written Theresa ! Worthy great win congrats !

Theresa Stephens

June 1, 2014 at 3:24 PM

Hi, I am most grateful to receive your lovely comments and appreciate you taking the time to read. All the best Theresa xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 1, 2014 at 1:54 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, theresa

Theresa Stephens

June 1, 2014 at 3:22 PM

Hi, Good of you to read and send your kind comments. Thank you. Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2014 at 11:34 PM

HEy, congrats, I see you on the winners' list!!!

Theresa Stephens

June 1, 2014 at 3:21 PM

Hi Andrea, Always pleased to receive your support. Thank you. Regards, Theresa xx

Joyce Johnson

May 31, 2014 at 9:03 PM

Merabules not in my Oxford Dictionary but it makes for a great poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Theresa Stephens

June 1, 2014 at 3:17 PM

Hi Joyce Thank you for your visiting. I am pleased you like this kimo. Merabules was a word that popped into my head. It can be anything you imagine it to be as it is science fiction based. I appreciate your kind congrats. Regards Theresa xx