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"To be in nature remote, alone is to enter a portal into

another realm unknown. _Poet

the forest is frozen with snow and ice and the bare trees are moaning . . . a stream still meanders ____________________ January 24, 2021 Poetry/Kimo Copyright Protected, ID 01-1323-414-24 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Your (Jan 24) Contest 903 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/25/2021 First Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2021 3:28:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. If it gets cold enough to freeze that stream all the way I expect we would be frozen as well. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2021 7:25:00 AM

Sara, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate _Constance