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Killers of the Soul

Do not covet the good fortune of others Greed and envy are killers of the soul. Achieving on my own, that’s my druthers, That is when I feel complete and whole. Greed and envy are killers of the soul, Good rarely comes from what isn’t earned That is when I feel complete and whole An important lesson in life I’ve learned. Good rarely comes from what isn’t earned Certainly, never will it be fully appreciated An important lesson in life I’ve learned, An envious attitude will never be satiated. Certainly, never will it be fully appreciated More craves more in a never-ending spiral, An envious attitude will never be satiated Indeed, it infects; it can be likened to a viral. More craves more in a never-ending spiral, Achieving on my own, that’s my druthers Indeed, it infects; it can be likened to a viral, Do not covet the good fortune of others. Written October 10, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/11/2022 6:01:00 AM

This is entirely true "An envious attitude will never be satiated." - I believe many learn this the hard way and over and over.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2022 9:29:00 AM

Yep, that seems to be the mistake. That kind of behavior is repeated over and over.

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2022 3:15:00 AM

Milt, a great Pantoum, your words inspirational. I believe we should never let greed fill our heart for it will be our downfall. Be happy for other peoples accomplishments, wins, etc, perhaps learn from their example, but never dislike them for it, that is a cowardly act, sure to bring only destruction to our self worth, Constance

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2022 9:30:00 AM

So true, Constance. Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful comment on my pantoum.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/10/2022 6:13:00 PM

Your words are biblical and true my friend. When God says what you have shared who can argue and not trust in your special words...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/10/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thanks, Michael.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/10/2022 11:14:00 AM

Greed and envy are not desirable traits. You've offered great advice.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/10/2022 12:08:00 PM

Thanks, Jenna. I think so. Too much of our lives is spent wanting what others have, not realizing that they can't really afford it, and we are better off without it.