Killer-Hunt

Darkness fall's the killer awake's
pull's on his boot's time to hunt
the killer has an evil siniser twisted mind
no feeling's, no moral's, no regret's
just self-satisfaction total gradifaction
the family of victim's he hurt never 
come's to mind
he awaken's in a drunken -drug vision
time to hunt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Leary Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 4:10 AM
Dark... Nice... Terry
Cox Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:03 AM
thank you terry
Pettit Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 11:50 PM
Interesting write. Try not to use apostrophes when you pluralize nouns and use verbs conjugated in third-person singular present tense. Apostrophes should only be used when a genitive or possessive case is present. Also, there is no such word as "gradifaction". I believe you wanted to use "gratification" in that line. In your third line, "siniser" should be "sinister".
Cox Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 12:32 AM
Robert, thank you for reading and sharing with me it will help me become alot better thank you!
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