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Kids One Commandment

She is a beautiful Sunday school teacher, and for children a mild mannered preacher; the commandments her special to feature; To explain, a commandment that honours father; mother, then asks her class “do you know of another, on how we should treat our sister and brother?” A voice let out a shrill, “Thou shalt not kill!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/2/2018 9:02:00 PM
Hah! having three brothers, I felt like that sometimes. Now as we've aged, it's more like 'dribbling rivalry'. Good write, Lindsay. Regards, Viv
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/6/2018 9:41:00 PM
G'day Viv ... siblings and murderous intent by kids means they're healthy. Thanks again mate - Lindsay
Date: 4/30/2018 12:36:00 PM
Where you been, mate? Great to see you back on soup, old cobber. Bob
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/6/2018 9:43:00 PM
Hi there Bob ... yeah, I took time off to concentrate on writing, but I took too long off - thanks for remembering me Bob - Lindsay

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