Kids Funny Bee Buzz Poem

A KIDS FUNNY BEE BUZZ POEM
								 
The fuzzy, wuzzy bumble bee
a fussy, hussy bee was he
because he lost his buzz you see
in a muggy, buggy mushroom tree

On mushrooms bitter, boggy black,
he planned an aerial attack,
but bouncing, pouncing skills he lacked
and failed to get his bee buzz back.

Now this fumbling, stumbling bumble bee
searched helter, skelter frantically
for a bigger bee to help him free
his bee buzz from the mushroom tree.

But no bee ever came around,
searched high and low, tree and ground,
but his buzz was never found,
a buzzless bee without his sound.

POOR FUZZY, WUZZY BUMBLEBEE

Liz Labadie-Reilly
October 18/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/31/2016 4:26:00 PM
A delightful children's poem, Liz! Cute! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
Good one, Liz! Congrats!
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:02:00 PM
This indeed reminds me of Dr. Suess!!......what a delightful poem and a great win, Liz !! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:50:00 PM
Children will love this delightful poem, Liz! I did, too:) Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:42:00 AM
Congrats Liz.
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Date: 5/20/2016 8:13:00 AM
As I said, very nice... deserved higher ranking!
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Date: 10/19/2015 3:29:00 AM
Good write.Rhyme and chime(sound) both.
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:54:00 PM
Kids will love this... very nice!
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:09:00 PM
a delightful poem Liz this really made me smile - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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