Kids and Crowns

Controversial....
drowning in a ibyss
of sequins and rhinestones
accented with patent leather shoes.
Forced into perfection
with pasty concrete smiles.
Tangled webs of lipstick and lollipops,
cheers and cheerios.
The confusing mix of a
glitzy, glamorous grownup world 
and dimpled grins at war 
with the tooth fairy.
Behind the false lashes
coiffed hair, plastic teeth,
the true novice soul emerges
leaving behind raccoon eyes
and powder streaked faces.
Encouraging or exploitive?
Mastering self expression 
and confidence, perhaps
but what of the confusion
that manifests between
role-playing and real life?
Controversial....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/22/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:00:00 AM
Liz congrats on your win..David
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Date: 3/21/2012 2:31:00 AM
A wonderful win congratulations Liz xx
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:27:00 PM
I'm waiting for the verdict. Congrlatulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:54:00 PM
I like this poem Liz, good work. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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