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There was a young bloke from Sydney Found a large stone in his kidney Went into a Doc Who took out the rock Surely felt better then did-n-ee

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Date: 5/4/2020 12:24:00 AM
G'day Warren … perhaps now he's better he get the stone fitted into a ring. Kidney stones are not fun - thanks Warren - Lindsay
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Warren Mbaht
Date: 5/4/2020 12:07:00 PM
On the other hand, leeave in the past what is in the past. Like watering eyes, lol
Date: 5/3/2020 2:46:00 PM
cute one!
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