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Kidney Stone

There was a young bloke from Sydney
Found a large stone in his kidney
Went into a Doc
Who took out the rock
Surely felt better then did-n-ee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 12:24 AM
G'day Warren … perhaps now he's better he get the stone fitted into a ring. Kidney stones are not fun - thanks Warren - Lindsay
Mbaht Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 12:07 PM
On the other hand, leeave in the past what is in the past. Like watering eyes, lol
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 2:46 PM
cute one!
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