Kid Stuff

I find it quite peculiar
the way you blow kisses in my hair
with such adolescent poise,
how they attach themselves, like dewdrops
to each strand
in a rash attempt to grow a notion 
from mere breath and spittle

and I, like a dandelion
go poof and tear myself 
from the only stem I've ever known
so that your wish
may rouse itself from slumber
and glisten just like morning dew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Foulk Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 10:00 AM
enjoyed this piece of fine creative work.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 4:36 AM
Cute and very creative..Congratulations on your work going into the second round..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Melissa. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:12 PM
QUTE
Knight Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Congratz on being featured, I like your poem
Sapp Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful imagery! It is so difficult to do a love poem; you nailed it!
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations Melissa on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Melissa. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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