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For my early morning/late night online Skype and PoetryChat friends, and for my boyfriend :)

Morning filled with conversations in my headsetted ringing ears under keyboarded fingers across the ocean next door I want to drink wine with you read Walt Whitman with you sleep in your arms publish with you dream Coffee for me, with sleep drunk eyes you horrible insomniacs you funny inspirational sharers of poetry and friendship I sit down with you, to beat loneliness keep it at bay, at distance I reach my hand to you all with tears of love *** March 18, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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J-Mag Guthrie

Date: 5/14/2017 9:56:00 AM

I like how the shape of your formatting draws the eye onward to continue...beckoning. A deft choice to center it so and to arrange your line breaks to craft visual arrows. In poetry, the form should reflect the content and your content of beckoning is perfectly suited here. Bravo!

Darren White
Date: 5/14/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thank you. I am glad you like this :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/20/2017 9:51:00 PM

So full of love and gratitude, it really is incredible to connect with people who understand and inspire us. Who knew when any of first joined PS the amazing friendships and bonds we would form and share our triumphs and sorrows with amazing friends, worldwide! This is a moving, heartfelt piece that is deeply felt Darren:-) Beautifully expressed. blessings, lynn

Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 12:58:00 AM

Thank you, Lynn. And yes, the people who think that you cannot form close friendships through the Internet, is so completely wrong!

Sara Ella

Date: 3/18/2017 10:38:00 PM

You, my friend, shine with these words and you make me smile :) So glad that there is this connection. <3

Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 11:36:00 PM

Sure am, my friend :) <3

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2017 2:04:00 PM

and grasp it, we do! Beautiful and touching sentiment, Darren - I just loved reading it! Isn't it great how in mass we all crossed the ocean via the internet? So many doors and hearts have opened as a result. love ya, CayCay

Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 5:42:00 PM

Yeah. Friends across the ocean are real and important. <3

Tim Smith

Date: 3/18/2017 1:12:00 PM

The sleepless nights are more comforting with a friend a keystroke away.

Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 1:14:00 PM

Yeah, they most certainly are :) Makes me happy!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/18/2017 9:41:00 AM

Sweet write, Darren, enjoyed. Funny, I have Walt in the bathroom right now, alas (?) I'll probably think of you next time I go... ;) xomo! 7 for the poem, and having to read this...

Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 9:53:00 AM

Walt in the bathroom??? Don't let him drop by accident LOL :) Thank you Mo :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/18/2017 5:24:00 AM

--Smile-- It is we readers Darren who thank you. Your work is amazing. Honestly. Always do you reach the element of heart and soul not to mention the emotive factor. Have a wonderful morning.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/18/2017 5:02:00 AM

Good Morning Darren. Oh the keyboard shall always be The Connection. It can be The Heartbeat and Lifeline. May I also say your words are a grand expression not to mention clever. I love the title. Wonderful work throughout including presentation and layout. May the fingers always reach the keyboard to connect to love. Well done. Have a great morning.

Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 5:08:00 AM

Ha Lisa. Yes, THE connection indeed. My very important lifeline. I wouldn't know what to do without. Also my friends are such a wonderful source of inspiration, as are you. Thank you, Lisa :)