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computer keyboard one key of each type record of these words Poetry of the noun competition entry

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Date: 2/5/2010 12:01:00 PM

I like the interesting perspective in this poem. Writers will relate to recording their words. I'm glad to hear you like seeing different forms here at The Soup. I've learned a lot by trying some of them. I like the concise forms best. Guess that's because I'm just a simple writer. Keep on writing! Thank you for taking time to comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 3:42:00 PM

Interesting use of the Haiku style in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 4:14:00 AM

Another gem from the "computer wizard"! Guess we could see ourselves as unique keys on a board that would not be complete without diversity, but even on the surface the meaning is quite eloquently expressed. Nice work, Nick. Best Wishes, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 1/24/2010 1:15:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku...Marty

Brian Strand

Date: 1/23/2010 12:25:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Nick.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 5:28:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Nick. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/22/2010 5:18:00 AM

Hi Nick, And thank God for keyboards, spell check, grammar check, and the universal, technological, man-made, God inspired inventions. It feels oh, so good not to retype a total document like in the olden days for a few little mistakes. LOL I love computers and I love your haiku! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann (Soup mail)

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 4:36:00 AM

I love it, this is oh so true, so much said in a haiku!