Gary Fields Poet Pastoral

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In this intimate moment
                 Of Prayer
As in just to have
That innate ability to give
              And receive
Of that lost begotten love
         That which
He beholds' so near
  And has bestowed
Upon my gracious Soul
         - Fore -
When the dawn breaks'
   And all the Heavens'
Hath sublimated all
        That their is
For one single solitary
        Reason, He
Restored that promise
Of an extended restoration
Known only to man
As the irreconcilable
         Dream'

                GF

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Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2011 at 12:20 AM wow! you told me to guess who you are... gosh... sounds interesting... is your last name HALL....lol...

Robert A. Dufresne June 18, 2011 at 6:11 AM very good Gary. I'm happy to see that you too see the importance of receiving and it is an ability that at times pride destroys in order to only be the giver without the chance of reciprocity.One must have and use that "innate ability" as you say to do both. Thanks you for your enlightening and kind comment on arboriginal

Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2011 at 12:18 AM G.F., very blessed and i like the solitary image of reason. A dream there and here... this was awesome of you to give,, cause i am the receiver....take care,. ( p.s.*have you checked out my Blog~ on contest ideas * ,..p.d.