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In this intimate moment Of Prayer As in just to have That innate ability to give And receive Of that lost begotten love That which He beholds' so near And has bestowed Upon my gracious Soul - Fore - When the dawn breaks' And all the Heavens' Hath sublimated all That their is For one single solitary Reason, He Restored that promise Of an extended restoration Known only to man As the irreconcilable Dream' GF

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Date: 8/3/2011 12:20:00 AM
wow! you told me to guess who you are... gosh... sounds interesting... is your last name HALL....lol...
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:11:00 AM
very good Gary. I'm happy to see that you too see the importance of receiving and it is an ability that at times pride destroys in order to only be the giver without the chance of reciprocity.One must have and use that "innate ability" as you say to do both. Thanks you for your enlightening and kind comment on arboriginal
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Date: 6/18/2011 12:18:00 AM
G.F., very blessed and i like the solitary image of reason. A dream there and here... this was awesome of you to give,, cause i am the receiver....take care,. ( p.s.*have you checked out my Blog~ on contest ideas * ,..p.d.
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