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Kestrel Falcon

She is quite the Mistress of the air, synchronize swimming where Eagles dare-stare, no need for landing batons or clearance, she has her own flare. She wraiths the hapless night and the brilliance of day, rakes the sky, knowing her beauty laid, showcased on big screenery- rewards God with a show bow and cloud kiss of why His All Knowingness plays, ~The Mistress (proud)

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Ink Empress

Date: 4/5/2024 12:32:00 AM

Brilliant personification, of the falcon, mistress of air, how well written; and articulated. I especially love the opening lines, as well as “ she has her own flare” strength and confidence, i see through those lines “ She wraiths the hapless night and the brilliance of day, rakes the sky, knowing her beauty, “ excellent!! And “ exquisite! Powerful descriptive write! Fave

Jude Herrick
Date: 4/5/2024 12:39:00 AM

Thank you, Ink Empress.