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Keepsake

Over the ken, a mistake with no karma. Crawling down the footpath, intense drama. Out through the castle's crack in the wall. We're coming down to the creek's squall. Here's a mill that's sparkling amid sound. Here is the lake with the froth lullaby. Here's the hump with pace in the ground. Wonderful areas, even they are nearby! Keepsake keenly kisses kindled kumquat. If I die with a pleasurable juggernaut. Wise Father, I'd relish some of your gray. As finale point, forgiveness all the way. I retain the hid locket safe in a gold case! Granny's keepsake pearls that I misplace!
Written: September 12, 2021 ''K'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Delightful Lasaad! Beautiful scenery. Hope you find "Granny's keepsake pearls!" Congrats and high fives to you! Blessings!
La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Poet Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much For reading placing and commenting on this poem it’s so much appreciated. Blessings and kindest regards
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful scenery and wonderful writing. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:49 PM
When we are all in heaven we tell each other where everything landed on earth lol, sweet write dear friend, keep sharing I'll keep smiling :)
Ball Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Lovely Lasaad. The picture here is perfect with the poem and everyone loves pearls. Loved this. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Loving memories--heartfelt, keepsake. All the best, Lasaad.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 4:31 AM
An absolutely marvelous Sonnet, my friend, Lasaad! It looks like a winner!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Your imagery is astounding.
Skelly Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Keepsake keenly kisses kindled kumquat...Well done with this tongue twister..Delice
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 9:40 PM
Love your Sonnet, i'm sure will do well in contest. Lasaad
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