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Over the ken, a mistake with no karma. Crawling down the footpath, intense drama. Out through the castle's crack in the wall. We're coming down to the creek's squall. Here's a mill that's sparkling amid sound. Here is the lake with the froth lullaby. Here's the hump with pace in the ground. Wonderful areas, even they are nearby! Keepsake keenly kisses kindled kumquat. If I die with a pleasurable juggernaut. Wise Father, I'd relish some of your gray. As finale point, forgiveness all the way. I retain the hid locket safe in a gold case! Granny's keepsake pearls that I misplace!
Written: September 12, 2021 ''K'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/15/2021 11:25:00 AM
Delightful Lasaad! Beautiful scenery. Hope you find "Granny's keepsake pearls!" Congrats and high fives to you! Blessings!
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Date: 9/15/2021 7:14:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/15/2021 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much For reading placing and commenting on this poem it’s so much appreciated. Blessings and kindest regards
Date: 9/14/2021 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful scenery and wonderful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/13/2021 1:49:00 PM
When we are all in heaven we tell each other where everything landed on earth lol, sweet write dear friend, keep sharing I'll keep smiling :)
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Date: 9/13/2021 6:17:00 AM
Lovely Lasaad. The picture here is perfect with the poem and everyone loves pearls. Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/13/2021 6:03:00 AM
Loving memories--heartfelt, keepsake. All the best, Lasaad.
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Date: 9/13/2021 4:31:00 AM
An absolutely marvelous Sonnet, my friend, Lasaad! It looks like a winner!
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Date: 9/13/2021 3:50:00 AM
Your imagery is astounding.
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Date: 9/13/2021 1:30:00 AM
Keepsake keenly kisses kindled kumquat...Well done with this tongue twister..Delice
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Date: 9/12/2021 9:40:00 PM
Love your Sonnet, i'm sure will do well in contest. Lasaad
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