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Keeping Mum

Reindeer wait by the pane I see shapes A present! Santa thinks I’m asleep Smells like mum lent Santa her perfume... ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 6/27/2023 7:12:00 PM
Pondered this one for a moment.
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Date: 6/27/2023 11:44:00 AM
I read these with a smile, Sneha :) and I am sure you wrote them with a grin on your face :) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/25/2021 2:28:00 PM
so I HAD seen this one before. Good seeing it again. It's so clever
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Date: 4/9/2020 6:36:00 AM
beautiful. Stay safe and I hope you are with your mum/family over Easter, if you celebrate, or not. L x
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Date: 1/2/2020 10:26:00 AM
lol Sneha how cute! Where are you my friend? I've been gone and I see you've been gone a while.
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Date: 11/15/2019 3:49:00 AM
Very nicely written! Love it.
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:57:00 AM
This is sweet. I can see why this is a winner.
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Date: 4/26/2019 8:10:00 AM
Very nicely done the last stanza... I didn't know Sam Billings was a cricketer, ...Thanks for the visit...
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Date: 2/13/2019 4:43:00 AM
Haha... Intelligent :)
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:29:00 PM
Cute and clever, Sneha! Nicely done. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:35:00 PM
revisting this one. It is truly enchanting.
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Date: 1/13/2019 3:21:00 AM
Very beautiful!
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Date: 1/6/2019 1:41:00 PM
Cute one. You pulled one on mom. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/2/2019 12:40:00 PM
this is just adorable!! Big congrats for your win, Sneha
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Date: 1/1/2019 11:50:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Sneha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/1/2019 7:35:00 PM
Very cute, Sneha. wonderfully done. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Happy New Year...Charlie
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Date: 1/1/2019 4:11:00 PM
Each haiku evokes holiday imagery..The last two are quite revealing of Santa's are so clever these days.
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Date: 12/30/2018 10:55:00 AM
Ha ha, this is cute! Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/29/2018 10:54:00 AM
LOL Sneha, the final poem made me giggle, maybe children have to 'keep mum' sometimes lol:-) Very clever poem and the title is perfect!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2018 6:45:00 AM
Nice one.. so nice to see you posting..
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Date: 12/29/2018 3:21:00 AM
Lovely haiku Sneha, hope you're well. Best wishes for the coming new year. Tom.
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