Keeping Earth's Estates

We're born; we learn; we love; we grow.
A field is given each to hoe.
Some seldom toil, while some plant deep
on earth's estates we're called to keep.

 For some the vines will overflow,
while others, cursed, seem wed to woe.
But time proceeds, and all shall weep
on earth's estates we're called to keep. 

Our destinies we can't forego,
for each must face his Jericho.
We sow, and then our death we reap
on earth's estates we're called to keep.

July 4, 2020
for Brian Strand's Strand Completely New ( 5 ) Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 7/8/2020 12:06:00 AM
Well done, my friend. I love your theme - "earth's estates." "Each must face his Jericho" - wonderful line . Congratulations! Many blessings!
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:33:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea, charmingly entertaining and my compliments on your honorary placement, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:15:00 PM
An Excellent Kyrielle Andrea! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 7/6/2020 12:21:00 PM
Back with congrats on your placement in Brian's contest, Andrea! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:58:00 AM
EXCELLENT kyrielle with deep thoughts and perfect flow. I really enjoyed this, my friend. Best wishes to you with Brian's contest ~ John
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Date: 7/5/2020 2:09:00 PM
Hoeing a fur row is indeed our destiny! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/5/2020 10:03:00 AM
It could have continued a bit longer...so good was the write...Well done
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Date: 7/5/2020 7:05:00 AM
I like the message you convey in this poem, Andrea. Love the rhythm!
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Date: 7/5/2020 12:26:00 AM
We sow, and then our death we reap.. Wow.. It is rare to see both beauty and depth together, like what I experience in your poetry, Andrea.. Good luck..
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:42:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, in classic style. Brilliantly written, Andrea! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/4/2020 10:58:00 PM
Hello Andrea … this verse is the way of life one hundred and fifty years ago. Very good indeed - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:41:00 PM
This gorgeous kyrielle is surreal in its beauty Andrea.
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