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Color My Mood Poetry Contest- Sponsor Nette Onclaud (5-27-25)

Keep The Faith

It's that color in the sky of black and white 
A faded dull color like dynamite 
Remnants of fireworks on display 
That dulls the ground where their ashes lay 
But soon the wind will blow them away
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Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Hope the wind has blown that gray mood far away by now, CM. Here's to vibrant colors, Gershon
Anaya Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 11:13 AM
The imagery of ashy smoke is clear to me, great rhyming, Charlie. Are you back if so that's really nice, I may take a summer's break~ Anaya
Buhagiar Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 8:55 AM
We will soon have a lot of fireworks displays throughout Spring and summer in Malta. Let's hope there will not be accidents.
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