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Color My Mood Poetry Contest- Sponsor Nette Onclaud (5-27-25)

It's that color in the sky of black and white A faded dull color like dynamite Remnants of fireworks on display That dulls the ground where their ashes lay But soon the wind will blow them away

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2025 8:08:00 PM

Hope the wind has blown that gray mood far away by now, CM. Here's to vibrant colors, Gershon

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/31/2025 11:13:00 AM

The imagery of ashy smoke is clear to me, great rhyming, Charlie. Are you back if so that's really nice, I may take a summer's break~ Anaya

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2025 8:55:00 AM

We will soon have a lot of fireworks displays throughout Spring and summer in Malta. Let's hope there will not be accidents.