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Keep Smiling

sunfilled peacefulness
ever teeter tottering
bouts of cloudiness



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Posted on November 5, 2017

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Isor Chand

Date: 11/19/2017 4:45:00 AM

Eight words , Eight infinities... Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you for your visit, Isor.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2017 7:02:00 PM

Such a beautiful and awe-inspiring Haiku Line. Excellent and enjoyed!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2017 7:37:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. Best wishes to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2017 2:27:00 PM

- Thanks ... peaceful lines, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful week!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 11/6/2017 8:28:00 AM

This can often be used to compare our moods from day to day or just life in general. Nice haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2017 9:34:00 AM

Thanks, Janice. Have an awesome day!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/6/2017 5:58:00 AM

Great comparison, Line, reminds that the sun is always behind those clouds :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2017 6:06:00 AM

Hi Jo, thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2017 8:01:00 PM

I like this. It really captures that emotional teeter totter that is life.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2017 6:05:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Have a wonderful day!

John Fleming

Date: 11/5/2017 7:16:00 PM

Rather an eye-catching comparison you have penned here, Line; almost like the difference between cool Spring and warm Summer...yes, I quite like it. My best regards. :) john

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/5/2017 7:19:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, John.