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sunfilled peacefulness ever teeter tottering bouts of cloudiness AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on November 5, 2017

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Date: 11/19/2017 4:45:00 AM
Eight words , Eight infinities... Line
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Isor.
Date: 11/18/2017 7:02:00 PM
Such a beautiful and awe-inspiring Haiku Line. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:37:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Best wishes to you.
Date: 11/6/2017 2:27:00 PM
- Thanks ... peaceful lines, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 5:13:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful week!
Date: 11/6/2017 8:28:00 AM
This can often be used to compare our moods from day to day or just life in general. Nice haiku.
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Date: 11/6/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. Have an awesome day!
Date: 11/6/2017 5:58:00 AM
Great comparison, Line, reminds that the sun is always behind those clouds :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:06:00 AM
Hi Jo, thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment. Have a great day!
Date: 11/5/2017 8:01:00 PM
I like this. It really captures that emotional teeter totter that is life.
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:05:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 11/5/2017 7:16:00 PM
Rather an eye-catching comparison you have penned here, Line; almost like the difference between cool Spring and warm Summer...yes, I quite like it. My best regards. :) john
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:19:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, John.
Date: 11/5/2017 4:50:00 PM
So true. Nice Haiku Line :)
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Have a wonderful week!

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