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Keep My Heart Awake

My heart In a slumber so deep Almost as if poison Has put me to sleep But you’re the one Just that one special person Your smile Makes me smile Your laugh Like the jingling of bells Your words are so soft and kind It makes my heart rewind Puts thoughts in my mind Maybe it’s time To give love another chance To let my heart dance In the joy you make me feel That feeling deep in my heart Like a shiver down my spine But the good kind The kind that makes me want to stay with you forever Together You’ll keep my heart alive Aware of the love I have So please The fact that I’m awake Don’t make it a mistake The heartbreak Will just be too much My heart will just fall asleep forever Never again to be awake ~10/17/17

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Date: 10/23/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thank you all so much!
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Date: 10/21/2017 9:29:00 AM
Hannah, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely love poem, well done !
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Jane Doe
Date: 10/22/2017 3:02:00 AM
Thank you so much! Making things work out in this poem was pretty tricky, but it looks like I did an OK job:)
Date: 10/20/2017 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Hannah ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/20/2017 6:27:00 PM
At first so light then crushing!! Excellent pen :) congratulations! xomo
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Jane Doe
Date: 10/21/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you!

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